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Elizabeth Sironta (Elizabeth)
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About Myself: I am an eighteen-year-old girl from a freezing and cold country called Finland. I like to imagine, and sometimes I let my imagination draw sceneries to a piece of paper, and that's how the stories come up...

I'm sorry if my stories contain mistakes or some words that might not be the best for the places they are, but I hope you understand the fact that English isn't my mother tongue. I encourage you to report about the worst mistakes, and maybe by that I'll become a better writer. Thanks!

And please, comment on my stories, or at least rate them! I'd like to know what do people think about them.

I don't have so much time to read stories here, but when I have, I often choose stories written by authors who have commented on my stories. So that might be a good reason for giving some comments to me...

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 11, 2008The Mute GuitaristMiscellaneous Stories 208
Feb 23, 2008The man who lost for the last timeScience Fiction 275
Feb 14, 2008The Last LetterNon-Fiction 382
Feb 10, 2008Escape through the windowPoetry 222
Feb 10, 2008Was it all that Black-and-white? - Part 2Science Fiction 253
Feb 9, 2008Was it all that Black-and-white? - Part 1Science Fiction 263

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Title article: Strength
Date: 2008-02-12 11:02:06

Oh, this is a beautiful piece of writing, I think. 
I liked the way the words rhymed in the third paragraph; it's so easy with English when there are those ing-words... 
The other paragraphs also fitted the pattern well, though in them the rhymes weren't so ... well, rhyming. :) 
 
As an entity this poem summons up a desire that everyone has sometimes, a desire of having a true friend. Lucky are those who have it...

Title article: Was it all that Black-and-white? - Part 1
Date: 2008-02-12 10:31:48

Thank you for your comment, Dirkin. :) 
Oh, it is kind of hard to put the words as they really should be, 'cos I guess that the cage of my mother tongue is so tight. We do settle the words a bit differently in Finnish... 
Well, that Zurk, Zork, Zerk -thing is there to tell about the confusing nick-names that today's adolescents use, and also about Spark's attitude towards them and the boy (whose name's real form is mentioned only once, by the way, when Micha says it). 
Yes, I also came to think about the fact that long stories might easily be ignored, but I thought that what the heck, I'll put it there anyway, and add some shorter stories later. 
Well, I'm eager to know what you think about the end... :) And thanks for the support!!

Title article: Was it all that Black-and-white? - Part 2
Date: 2008-02-10 12:25:25
Please, comment on it!
Tell me what you think of it... Please. 
 
Maybe I'll tell what I think of your stories...

Title article: Don't know what you've got, until it's gone.
Date: 2008-02-10 11:07:36

Why, this was a catchy piece of writing... Maybe it would be good to have situations like this in life, so that one can learn to appreciate the things they have... 
 
-> to my favourites

Title article: Unfaithful Life
Date: 2008-02-10 08:40:02
Wow...
Well, this sure was a good story, though a bit too predictable, at least for me. Somehow I just gueassed that the man chasing the main character was the asthma patient from the café... 
Luckily there was still this part where the man jumped from the window; I didn't expect anyhting like that, so it kind of drew my respect back to this story. 
 
A fine story it still is.

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