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Thomas Laroque (Baethan Dawn)
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Member Since 02/03/2008
Last Online 09/02/2008
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About Myself: Hi there. I'm a close friend of June Lunare, and I write poetry and fiction.
I am fairly new to writing, so bare with me. I have been fond of June Lunare's writings, so I am inspired by her works. Thanks for visiting and please enjoy anything I post here.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 20, 2008My First Experience on a High School BusHumor 151
Feb 7, 2008All is WellMystery 309
Feb 7, 2008Silent LightPoetry 180
Feb 4, 2008Underlight SeaPoetry 251

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Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-08 14:02:03
These
Diamonds were given to you.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-08 13:39:17
I think
She intentionally put (I) running short of breath there. She REALLY sounds out of breathe.

Title article: Underlight Sea
Date: 2008-02-07 17:26:45
that
wasn't me up there.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-07 11:55:58
Oh
And since when were rules of writing carved in stone? Obviously this story doesn't qualify as a short story. But, who has the write to say that? Pablo Picasso's artwork was probably not even considered as a piece of artwork back then. And saying, "Well we say it is now" is no excuse. I think we are way too conventional.

Title article: Underlight Sea
Date: 2008-02-06 19:25:31

liked the word choice in it...not overdone or to simple

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-06 05:28:48
Um...
I don't think he was trying to critique your story. He probably wanted to do was he said he was doing: giving a bad comment. But, yes, I agree with you.

Title article: Love
Date: 2008-02-04 21:21:34
Perhaps...
One of your most beautiful works. You are beautiful, outside and in, August. It really shows here.

Title article: Breathe Once Again
Date: 2008-02-04 15:25:37
Lol
Naw, I'm jost joking with you. No need for bedsheets. But, come over, I have a new hamster and he's soooo cute!

Title article: Breathe Once Again
Date: 2008-02-04 12:39:13
(Blows a kiss)
Thanks, I really appreciate that. 
Lets meet at my house. I have plenty of paper and bedsheets (wink).

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-04 12:36:30
Well, I did and that's all that matters
Thanks for the laugh, beautiful. Your name is really pretty.

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