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About Myself:

Hi there. I'm a close friend of June Lunare, and I write poetry and fiction.
I am fairly new to writing, so bare with me. I have been fond of June Lunare's writings, so I am inspired by her works. Thanks for visiting and please enjoy anything I post here.

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 20, 2008	My First Experience on a High School Bus	Humor	142
Feb 7, 2008	All is Well	Mystery	290
Feb 7, 2008	Silent Light	Poetry	173
Feb 4, 2008	Underlight Sea	Poetry	241

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Total number of comments: 25

Title article: Super Short Scenes, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-06-14 08:52:25

Lol
I love June Eclipsis's sarcasm. It cracks me up.

Title article: Super Short Scenes, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-06-14 08:40:17

...
No wonder we all hate critics.
And I don't think it's us to blame.

Title article: Confused Poet, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-04-03 12:30:12

LOL
Sounds like the anxiety of studying for a test. "Arrrggghhh! I can't remember!"

Title article: Something I wrote when I was fifteen Chap. 1: the beginning
Date: 2008-04-02 05:49:35

Wow
That's quite a talent for a fifteen year old. Hmmm...you were a lot more wordy then than you are now. Now, you're more straight-forward and clear.

Title article: A Love Story Forgotten
Date: 2008-03-27 05:35:39

Well,
Sorry, folks. This is her style. In her penname June Eclipsis, "Eclipsis" means omission or suppression of parts of words or sentences.
She's very atmospheric and this story was intended to be a very atmospheric one. It's like emotion in a vacuum.
So, if you have complaints, there's not really much you can do about it.
I, personally, loved it!

Title article: The Good Morning
Date: 2008-03-17 13:31:22

Lol
That tree thing was totally random. What did it have to with this story. Hmmmmmmm?????

Title article: Snow White Winter
Date: 2008-03-11 20:43:25

I think
She was trying to say that he shot the birds. Earlier on in the story, you'll see that the birds looked like they were leaves.
At the end, he shoots and leaves fall.
Towards the beginning, it mentions that the bird's wings were like leaves and that the leaves have already fallen because it is winter.
It think the man is paranoid and wants the winter to remain there, and since the birds looked like leaves, he shot them down.
I know, it took some thinking myself in order to get it.

Title article: Tears of an Ocean
Date: 2008-03-05 09:45:03

Oh, yeah...
And another thing...
Aren't these characters from "The Battle of Moltenburg?"

Title article: Tears of an Ocean
Date: 2008-03-05 09:43:46

I like...
how your writing style is very surreal and how it doesn't show much. After re-reading this for the fourth time, I think the last part of the story is signifying that Thomas, in fact, did not commit suicide and that he still loves her. Am I right?

Title article: Flipping Hamburgers
Date: 2008-02-18 05:34:51

Wow
This is very disturbing....yet it's so true. The days I thought were the worst times of my life came right after I thought I couldn't be happier. This is very insightful, yet beautiful and disturbing at the same time. The title, although it doesn't suit your style, does match the poem's content. I love it!

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