From Stagnant Water

The rain had finally stopped. After two days of...

My Present

I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...
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Christian Wright (The 13th)
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Member Since 02/01/2008
Last Online 09/04/2008
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About Myself: My name is Christian and I live in the Wicklow mountains.I have a great job working with the blind and deaf community.
Always a great fibber as a kid and best described as a dreamer.
Started writing last year but always spent my time talking about an idea I had. My stories are my darkest thoughts, some maybe I'm a bit afraid of myself.Deleted my old stuff, might put em up some time.Working on Frantic.Got the idea last year when I brought my son to the St patricks festival in Dublin and briefly lost sight of him.Goodluck.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 5, 2008Frantic, Chapter 4Mystery 133
Aug 1, 2008Frantic, Chapter 3Mystery 155
Jul 27, 2008Frantic, Chapter 2Mystery 183
Jul 8, 2008Frantic, Chapter 1Mystery 482

Comments

Total number of comments: 756

Title article: IT'S HARD
Date: 2008-09-04 14:38:52

Processor, if your lad is shaped like that.Get to the doctor quick lol

Title article: Bonnie
Date: 2008-09-03 13:14:38

Harmattan, dont mind Alfred, as the irish would say he's just messing with ya.lol 
 
To the poem.My parents always had a dog, and now I have a family of my own.I felt its right for my son to have a dog of his own.Its amazing how dogs became so important in the family unit. 
Watcha 13.

Title article: Relive - A Broken Headlight, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-31 11:59:57

Grand job.Story read like a breeze.Didnt see any errors bit I wasn't looking. 
I like your characters, and if you either build on chapter 2 or bin it you will have a fine story.Waiting for chapter 4.

Title article: Relive - Jake, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-31 11:55:12

Right, I gotta agree with Gtmike.It lost me a bit but did you need that chapter to explain why everyone turned into Zombies. Just a brief explanation would of done.Anyway off to chapter 3.

Title article: Relive - Relocation, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-31 11:49:00

Oka first things first. SK did not write this story, he wrote a story about people that turn into Zombies because of a cell phone network. 
I love Zombie stories, and most are all the same.BUT i think youv'e got great detail in the characters and I enjoyed the first chapter. 
If you get the time, read The church.Its on storiesville.A great zombie series. 
Great start, off to chapter2.

Title article: Under The Stars.
Date: 2008-08-23 11:49:59

Dont normally comment on your work Nunyo because I know you like big explanations not just "good work".I've read this three or four times,I like to comeback to it from time to time.I felt alot of sadness in this , but I think its one of your best to date.Really enjoyed it.

Title article: WO(W)NDERFUL WIFE
Date: 2008-08-22 11:01:27

Hmm. Thoughtful. This is a charming piece of writing that I have read in recent times. One must always strive to strike a chord in a reader’s heart. You have achieved it in great measure. Good job. Keep it up. ;-)

Title article: Telephone Meow
Date: 2008-08-12 13:09:22

Firstly your lay-out needs tidying up and there is some grammar issues. 
I didn't really dig your story but I see by your profile that you write stories about silly things so that dont make sense... 
But we are a open minded bunch here so the next reader will probably love this.So write on.

Title article: garryowen, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-12 13:03:53

I like em, because maybe because I enjoy the stories of the past and the struggles we take for granted. 
You probally told this, but I dont remember seeing this .But what year is this set in.Anyway slow chapter but I enjoyed it all the same 
 
I was told by relations that when they left Ireland to birmingham many many years ago, the bed and breakfast had signs with... 
 
No blacks , no Irish , no dogs.

Title article: The Sphinxes Teeth, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-08-12 12:56:12

There is a few series on here that when I see them I get really excited.And these are one of them. 
Slow chapter compared to the last one but I can see why.The story of the good and the bad are coming out, shit I'm starting to sound Like chabbuk. 
Anyway grand chapter and looking forward to the next.This seems as if it could be a novel.Maybe I'm wrong.

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OFFLINE Kasi (Kasi Elaborated)
OFFLINE Project 30 (Project 30)
OFFLINE Philip Neale (philneale1952)
OFFLINE Tom Shandruk (Tom Shandruk)
ONLINE Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)
OFFLINE tomahawk (tomahawk)
OFFLINE Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)
OFFLINE JS Brown (Crazy Scott)
OFFLINE Michelle Huff (allmine)
OFFLINE Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
 
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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 08/13/2008 14:07:09
'ello!

I'm growing impatient, I'm growing quite frantic

lol

anyways, thought of a great Irish band that you should listen to. Dropkick Murphys.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 08/10/2008 09:20:41
Awesome! Maniacs are my friiieennnds ...

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 08/10/2008 01:02:54
Just wondering when the new Frantic is coming ...

I'm addicted
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 08/08/2008 23:25:56
Great writing with Frantic.

I'm curious on what other kinds of stories you can conjure.

But don't go away from Frantic, it's great.

Keep well,

Max
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

your pocket
 Created On: 08/06/2008 14:51:42
I'm always in the market for a stalker

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 08/01/2008 13:07:36
How remiss of me. Reallyn should keep up with commentators.

Here's mud in your eye........

Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

in the lemon grove
 Created On: 07/21/2008 13:13:14
Where have you been? Its not the same here without ya.

Xena Elvoniche (Xena)

way ay ay ay
 Created On: 07/16/2008 12:15:02
ay you now i know you... but wherd the dstoires of the rest go?
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

hiding in the picture with Angelina
 Created On: 07/13/2008 20:16:56
Edited By Amie Kerlin (lemon) On: 07/13/2008 20:17:54
You look like you could use a stalker..


Angelina's hand and wrist look like they will break at any moment they are so bony.
Feedback from Christian Wright (The 13th): Dont be dissing "The Angelina" Lemon.She is the ultimate babe.
r.e.potter (r.e.potter)

 Created On: 06/24/2008 13:06:03
now that pic is smoking

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