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Member Since	02/01/2008
Last Online	10/12/2008
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About Myself:

My name is Christian and I live in the Wicklow mountains.I have a great job working with the blind and deaf community.
Always a great fibber as a kid and best described as a dreamer.
Started writing last year but always spent my time talking about an idea I had. My stories are my darkest thoughts, some maybe I'm a bit afraid of myself.Deleted my old stuff, might put em up some time.Working on Frantic.Got the idea last year when I brought my son to the St patricks festival in Dublin and briefly lost sight of him.Goodluck.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 16, 2008	The Dry Well	Horror	144
Sep 15, 2008	Part of History	Mystery	114
Sep 14, 2008	The Toilet Attendant	Mystery	156
Sep 13, 2008	Ferry Man	Mystery	168
Sep 11, 2008	The Bronze Lady (part two)	Mystery	99
Sep 11, 2008	The Bronze lady(Part One)	Mystery	108
Aug 5, 2008	Frantic, Chapter 4	Mystery	174
Aug 1, 2008	Frantic, Chapter 3	Mystery	197
Jul 27, 2008	Frantic, Chapter 2	Mystery	236
Jul 8, 2008	Frantic, Chapter 1	Mystery	523

Comments

Title article: CAVEAT EMPTOR (Gambia 1996)
Date: 2008-09-11 13:06:09

What goes around, comes around.
I'm gonna repeat what the rest of the gang said but...
Read really smoothly and I loved the end. Could picture Ouchly Batman in my head.
Great job.

Title article: The Bronze Lady (part two)
Date: 2008-09-11 06:53:43

Sorry about the repost.Fed up at looking at my small ammount of stories on my profile.Cheers 13.

Title article: It-Mom
Date: 2008-09-10 14:33:21

Johny killed his mammy
I thought Johny was a bit harsh.The thing made him pancakes and talked about the birds and he stabbed it.Should of left the thing alone, might have highered his pocket money.
Grand story but I like the weird.Just a bit more story at the begining.What are the things.I thought the end was pretty good, good suspense.

Title article: Whore
Date: 2008-09-10 14:19:16

Nice piece of flash fiction you got there.Knew a few women like her when I was younger...Some good times lol
But how you told the story...kinda sad.
Good job Michelle.

Title article: Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 2)
Date: 2008-09-09 12:30:36

You know what I like about this...I just dont know where You gonna take this.A very good mystery story... with a human aspect.What I mean the conversations are not mindane.
Great job and waiting for number 3.

Title article: Secrets of St. Margaret's
Date: 2008-09-06 13:54:23

Your story is like a box of chocolotes.You dont know which one you gonna get.Trajic , humour or something weird.
I take it this is the story you told me about, so I cannot wait for the remaining chapters.Thought you told it well and you explained Brad and his family well.
Just dont keep me waiting for chapter 2.
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Title article: IT'S HARD
Date: 2008-09-04 14:38:52

Processor, if your lad is shaped like that.Get to the doctor quick lol

Title article: Relive - A Broken Headlight, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-31 11:59:57

Grand job.Story read like a breeze.Didnt see any errors bit I wasn't looking.
I like your characters, and if you either build on chapter 2 or bin it you will have a fine story.Waiting for chapter 4.

Title article: Relive - Jake, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-31 11:55:12

Right, I gotta agree with Gtmike.It lost me a bit but did you need that chapter to explain why everyone turned into Zombies. Just a brief explanation would of done.Anyway off to chapter 3.

Title article: Relive - Relocation, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-31 11:49:00

Oka first things first. SK did not write this story, he wrote a story about people that turn into Zombies because of a cell phone network.
I love Zombie stories, and most are all the same.BUT i think youv'e got great detail in the characters and I enjoyed the first chapter.
If you get the time, read The church.Its on storiesville.A great zombie series.
Great start, off to chapter2.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

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10/07/2008 09:51:28	Re:The Music Video Thread	Off-Topic	352
10/06/2008 15:16:55	Re:The Music Video Thread	Off-Topic	352
10/04/2008 14:55:44	Re:The Music Video Thread	Off-Topic	352
10/01/2008 14:09:11	Re:Phil's Birthday	Off-Topic	320
10/01/2008 03:14:20	Re:24 hour reset...	Off-Topic	73
09/30/2008 15:28:19	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	316764
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Connection

Christian Wright (The 13th)'s connections

Amy Carter (scooby)

Kasi (Kasi Elaborated)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Tom Shandruk (Tom Shandruk)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tomahawk (tomahawk)

Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)

JS Brown (Crazy Scott)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) down the corner and to the left	Created On: 10/03/2008 12:21:21 Just passing thru...get some new stuff up dude....forget house, work and family for awhile and sit lazily on the computer and write something.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/13/2008 14:07:09 'ello! I'm growing impatient, I'm growing quite frantic lol anyways, thought of a great Irish band that you should listen to. Dropkick Murphys.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/10/2008 09:20:41 Awesome! Maniacs are my friiieennnds ...
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/10/2008 01:02:54 Just wondering when the new Frantic is coming ... I'm addicted
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/08/2008 23:25:56 Great writing with Frantic. I'm curious on what other kinds of stories you can conjure. But don't go away from Frantic, it's great. Keep well, Max
Amie Kerlin (lemon) your pocket	Created On: 08/06/2008 14:51:42 I'm always in the market for a stalker
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire, England	Created On: 08/01/2008 13:07:36 How remiss of me. Reallyn should keep up with commentators. Here's mud in your eye........ Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon) in the lemon grove	Created On: 07/21/2008 13:13:14 Where have you been? Its not the same here without ya.
Xena Elvoniche (Xena) way ay ay ay	Created On: 07/16/2008 12:15:02 ay you now i know you... but wherd the dstoires of the rest go?
Amie Kerlin (lemon) hiding in the picture with Angelina	Created On: 07/13/2008 20:16:56 Edited By Amie Kerlin (lemon) On: 07/13/2008 20:17:54 You look like you could use a stalker.. Angelina's hand and wrist look like they will break at any moment they are so bony. Feedback from Christian Wright (The 13th): Dont be dissing "The Angelina" Lemon.She is the ultimate babe.