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Member Since	02/01/2008
Last Online	10/07/2008
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About Myself:

My name is Christian and I live in the Wicklow mountains.I have a great job working with the blind and deaf community.
Always a great fibber as a kid and best described as a dreamer.
Started writing last year but always spent my time talking about an idea I had. My stories are my darkest thoughts, some maybe I'm a bit afraid of myself.Deleted my old stuff, might put em up some time.Working on Frantic.Got the idea last year when I brought my son to the St patricks festival in Dublin and briefly lost sight of him.Goodluck.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 16, 2008	The Dry Well	Horror	139
Sep 15, 2008	Part of History	Mystery	114
Sep 14, 2008	The Toilet Attendant	Mystery	149
Sep 13, 2008	Ferry Man	Mystery	162
Sep 11, 2008	The Bronze Lady (part two)	Mystery	92
Sep 11, 2008	The Bronze lady(Part One)	Mystery	106
Aug 5, 2008	Frantic, Chapter 4	Mystery	173
Aug 1, 2008	Frantic, Chapter 3	Mystery	195
Jul 27, 2008	Frantic, Chapter 2	Mystery	231
Jul 8, 2008	Frantic, Chapter 1	Mystery	522

Comments

Title article: The Church Part 11- A little trip, Chapter 11
Date: 2008-09-14 15:24:51

Just flipping great.
Life dont get better than this.A can of guiness and a turkey coleslaw roll and then wham, another church chapter.
I liked this, loads of action.The format is a bit screwy in parts but thats probably the changeover from word to storiesville.Youv'e probabaly spotted it by now.John just promise me we will get the next chapter soon.I'm a fan, great chaper to a great story.

Title article: Behind Blue Eyes- Chapter Two, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-09-14 13:53:54

You have already nailed the zombie genre and now it looks like your on the way with a good old thriller.
Enjoyed this chapter but try not to leave it too long, dam addictive.
Now all you goto do now is post the next church!!
Well done John

Title article: Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 4)
Date: 2008-09-14 13:48:13

This is running really smoothly.Great description but I think Father Delmont was too secretive.Maybe I'm wrong butI think he's involved in this somehow.Waiting for the next chapter...

Title article: Ferry Man
Date: 2008-09-13 06:23:50

Yep another re-post.I will release some thing new soon.Promise.:)

Title article: Dr. Lovecraft: A Tribute to H.P. Lovecraft
Date: 2008-09-13 01:07:20

I'm ashamed to say I didn't know who lovecraft was.Just googled him.Sounded a interesting guy.Agree with the above, make it a little longer.

Title article: Secrets of St. Margaret's (part 3)
Date: 2008-09-12 05:42:01

ITS BEHIND YOU!!!
You know Potter, were so alike.Never let the woman make a decision .There little minds could'nt take it, bless em. lol
My problem with this story is waiting for the next chapter. I agree with Phil with the tension, its really building up nicely.I think this is gonna be another Potter gold story.Watcha ,be good.

Title article: A History of the Defeated.
Date: 2008-09-12 05:35:22

I sort of agree with the above but...
What I know now that this is your style and this is how you like to write so write away.I like your descriptions and it was sweetly told.I know you like harsh critiscm but If this is the finished storythere is nothing I can say to help it.
Good luck.

Title article: Bee Wars
Date: 2008-09-12 05:30:50

Little buggers.
The same sort of thing happened to me with wasps, little buggers.But The dog has taken a liking for them, he eats em.
Funny story, painted the picture well.Grand job.

Title article: Confessions of a Teenage Psyche Case
Date: 2008-09-11 13:15:55

I suppose it's amusing in a way.Not my cup of tea but good job.You should re-release the blue room( i think that was the name)
It was very good.

Title article: Horror shoppe in Athens Texas, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-11 13:12:54

Kinda reminded me of one of the shops in Harry Potter.I thought it was a good story, and will be looking out for chapter 2.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
10/07/2008 09:51:28	Re:The Music Video Thread	Off-Topic	331
10/06/2008 15:16:55	Re:The Music Video Thread	Off-Topic	331
10/04/2008 14:55:44	Re:The Music Video Thread	Off-Topic	331
10/01/2008 14:09:11	Re:Phil's Birthday	Off-Topic	304
10/01/2008 03:14:20	Re:24 hour reset...	Off-Topic	68
09/30/2008 15:28:19	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	312833
09/30/2008 13:40:41	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	312833
09/28/2008 15:11:24	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	312833
09/13/2008 18:26:28	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	312833
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Connection

Christian Wright (The 13th)'s connections

Amy Carter (scooby)

Kasi (Kasi Elaborated)

Project 30 (Project 30)

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Tom Shandruk (Tom Shandruk)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

tomahawk (tomahawk)

Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)

JS Brown (Crazy Scott)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) down the corner and to the left	Created On: 10/03/2008 12:21:21 Just passing thru...get some new stuff up dude....forget house, work and family for awhile and sit lazily on the computer and write something.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/13/2008 14:07:09 'ello! I'm growing impatient, I'm growing quite frantic lol anyways, thought of a great Irish band that you should listen to. Dropkick Murphys.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/10/2008 09:20:41 Awesome! Maniacs are my friiieennnds ...
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/10/2008 01:02:54 Just wondering when the new Frantic is coming ... I'm addicted
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 08/08/2008 23:25:56 Great writing with Frantic. I'm curious on what other kinds of stories you can conjure. But don't go away from Frantic, it's great. Keep well, Max
Amie Kerlin (lemon) your pocket	Created On: 08/06/2008 14:51:42 I'm always in the market for a stalker
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire, England	Created On: 08/01/2008 13:07:36 How remiss of me. Reallyn should keep up with commentators. Here's mud in your eye........ Phil
Amie Kerlin (lemon) in the lemon grove	Created On: 07/21/2008 13:13:14 Where have you been? Its not the same here without ya.
Xena Elvoniche (Xena) way ay ay ay	Created On: 07/16/2008 12:15:02 ay you now i know you... but wherd the dstoires of the rest go?
Amie Kerlin (lemon) hiding in the picture with Angelina	Created On: 07/13/2008 20:16:56 Edited By Amie Kerlin (lemon) On: 07/13/2008 20:17:54 You look like you could use a stalker.. Angelina's hand and wrist look like they will break at any moment they are so bony. Feedback from Christian Wright (The 13th): Dont be dissing "The Angelina" Lemon.She is the ultimate babe.