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Jul 8, 2008Frantic, Chapter 1Mystery 79

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r.e.potter (r.e.potter)

 Created On: 06/24/2008 13:06:03
now that pic is smoking

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in the sticks
 Created On: 06/03/2008 18:15:08
Edited By ghostwriter (sTiCkFiGuRe) On: 06/03/2008 18:15:42
We want Angelina!!..We want Angelina!!
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Total number of comments: 577

Title article: Frantic, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-08 23:57:12

There stories always bring the violence out of ya.Now come on lets all have a group hug.Thanks for the advice and encouragement.I've change the spelling, dam spellcheck.Gonna slow this story down a way bit, this was just trying to grab your attention.But 1 thing i do is write for myself. I will leave as it is and maybe when one day when I'm a big boy I will change it.Thanks for the comments and goodluck.It's good to be back.

Title article: The Letter
Date: 2008-07-08 15:54:37

I'm a bit lost for words cause the lads above me have said it for me. 
i liked the twist and I felt for the poor woman. 
Gettin a bit worried maybe i'm a bit simular to your male character.I'm a git sometimes.

Title article: Fat Phobia
Date: 2008-06-30 02:03:27

Dont be heartbroken.It was'nt that bad.Most of us are here to learn anyway, even Flossy.The story just needs a bit more content.May be humour.That's upto you.Keep with it.Goodluck.

Title article: Thirteen Years Of Gray, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-30 01:23:29

It was interesting.But I felt it dragged a fair bit.You gotta try and give the reader a gold coin in every chapter.It makes them go to chapter 2.

Title article: December 23
Date: 2008-06-30 01:18:10

A story is like making love to a woman.Take your time.lol 
 
Listen, you have the basic idea down but it does need some tlc.But if it was my story and it needed some work.I would be too embaressed to leave it up for every one to see.No offense.

Title article: Betrayed by a friend
Date: 2008-06-25 14:46:42

For once I agree with ZP.These comments are here to help.Take it on the chin and fix the errors or just delete the comments but stop whinging like a girl.

Title article: A World Without oil
Date: 2008-06-24 14:40:10

Bungle, you know what's sad in this story.Looks as if coming true.A nice ditty, not one of your best but it got me thinking.You should see if you could get a longer story.It was a tad too short but no big geal.Thanks for posting Rich.

Title article: Why Do I Cry
Date: 2008-05-22 11:41:12

Lovely,realy heartfelt.

Title article: Number 1
Date: 2008-05-22 11:39:52

Liked it.Simple.

Title article: The Church- Part 8- We must try for peace
Date: 2008-05-13 09:50:47

John, this story is great.Well done.

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