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r.e.potter (r.e.potter)

 Created On: 06/24/2008 13:06:03
now that pic is smoking

ghostwriter (sTiCkFiGuRe)

in the sticks
 Created On: 06/03/2008 18:15:08
Edited By ghostwriter (sTiCkFiGuRe) On: 06/03/2008 18:15:42
We want Angelina!!..We want Angelina!!
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Total number of comments: 574

Title article: Fat Phobia
Date: 2008-06-30 02:03:27

Dont be heartbroken.It was'nt that bad.Most of us are here to learn anyway, even Flossy.The story just needs a bit more content.May be humour.That's upto you.Keep with it.Goodluck.

Title article: Thirteen Years Of Gray, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-30 01:23:29

It was interesting.But I felt it dragged a fair bit.You gotta try and give the reader a gold coin in every chapter.It makes them go to chapter 2.

Title article: December 23
Date: 2008-06-30 01:18:10

A story is like making love to a woman.Take your time.lol 
 
Listen, you have the basic idea down but it does need some tlc.But if it was my story and it needed some work.I would be too embaressed to leave it up for every one to see.No offense.

Title article: Betrayed by a friend
Date: 2008-06-25 14:46:42

For once I agree with ZP.These comments are here to help.Take it on the chin and fix the errors or just delete the comments but stop whinging like a girl.

Title article: A World Without oil
Date: 2008-06-24 14:40:10

Bungle, you know what's sad in this story.Looks as if coming true.A nice ditty, not one of your best but it got me thinking.You should see if you could get a longer story.It was a tad too short but no big geal.Thanks for posting Rich.

Title article: Why Do I Cry
Date: 2008-05-22 11:41:12

Lovely,realy heartfelt.

Title article: Number 1
Date: 2008-05-22 11:39:52

Liked it.Simple.

Title article: The Church- Part 8- We must try for peace
Date: 2008-05-13 09:50:47

John, this story is great.Well done.

Title article: Metzger Part 1
Date: 2008-05-10 10:28:17

I really enjoyed this Billy, waiting for part 2... 
I can see you've put alot into this .Well done mate.

Title article: Perfect Match
Date: 2008-04-27 04:23:04

I enjoyed it, nice gentle read. Relationships are the same the world over, my girlfriend sounds very simular to your wife.Just a few things.Proof read it, i thought I saw a spelling error and I think check your grammar. 
"I could be wrong," I said.

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