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Xena Elvoniche (Xena)

way ay ay ay
 Created On: 07/16/2008 12:15:02
ay you now i know you... but wherd the dstoires of the rest go?
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

hiding in the picture with Angelina
 Created On: 07/13/2008 20:16:56
Edited By Amie Kerlin (lemon) On: 07/13/2008 20:17:54
You look like you could use a stalker..


Angelina's hand and wrist look like they will break at any moment they are so bony.
Feedback from Christian Wright (The 13th): Dont be dissing "The Angelina" Lemon.She is the ultimate babe.
r.e.potter (r.e.potter)

 Created On: 06/24/2008 13:06:03
now that pic is smoking

ghostwriter (sTiCkFiGuRe)

in the sticks
 Created On: 06/03/2008 18:15:08
Edited By ghostwriter (sTiCkFiGuRe) On: 06/03/2008 18:15:42
We want Angelina!!..We want Angelina!!
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Total number of comments: 639

Title article: The Others
Date: 2008-07-16 16:45:31

I think this is much better and easier to understand.But I do think you have a very good idea here and maybe make it into a series or a longer story.I really enjoyed it.Well done.

Title article: The Others
Date: 2008-07-16 12:10:36

I thought the idea is a great idea.Enjoyed the story, but in parts got a bit hazy.But I say stick with this story because it's a very clever idea.Good job.

Title article: Haunted Sorrow
Date: 2008-07-16 05:50:19

Brilliant writing but with a creepy feel. 
As always great work.

Title article: Just Let Me Eat You
Date: 2008-07-16 05:29:36

Yeah really different and a great idea.Enjoyed the story, I think you could make it into a longer story.Grand.

Title article: The Last Supper?
Date: 2008-07-16 05:05:00

I saw nothing wrong with this.Its flash fiction. 
Grand story.I actually smiled at the end. 
What do I do with the bones. 
Give them to the dog.

Title article: Day of Revelation
Date: 2008-07-15 14:14:10

**slaps hand on head. 
 
Re-read it..Aint young love just grand. 
I like the descriptions of the storm and his sure right about the weathermen or weatherpeople. 
Bastards.

Title article: "The Campground"
Date: 2008-07-15 14:07:58

Yeah Phil is right.Really good story, and you had me at the begining.But the ending was bit of a let down.But good idea and good story.This reminded me of these tenage/horror movies with 20 year old cheerleaders running around the place half naked.(lol)

Title article: Day of Revelation
Date: 2008-07-15 13:59:53

Have you been smoking the pot again. 
You have a way of pulling me int your stories .I gotta admit I did'nt get it but I just thought it was great descriptions and written pretty good. 
But listen I've had a hard day of trying to entertain a 3 year old. 
Pass that spliff over Potter will ya. 
Ahh just read "Big Phil" comment, rollercoaster, good idea Potter.

Title article: Lights, Camera, Action.
Date: 2008-07-15 13:53:22

It was cold and calculated.Enjoyable story but I love mob stories.Good one.

Title article: Because It's There
Date: 2008-07-15 13:46:09

Nice story and brought back some memories as a kid.Broke my arm racing down a "devils hill"(a very steephill) when I was 10 on a shopping trolley. 
Nicely written.

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