The Gift - Awakening

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Kiril Kostov (Munky)
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Last Online 08/24/2008
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Title article: Japanese Restaurant
Date: 2008-03-20 02:20:19

Hah. Such a wonderful story. Great descriptions, the fight scenes were awesome, and by that I mean gruesome :) I would only suggest that you differentiate between those 3 men because it's hard to follow when they are referred to as, the 1st, 2nd etc. I also enjoyed the twist at the end. All in all, wonderful job. Keep it up.

Title article: The Insane Lady
Date: 2008-03-20 02:09:41

I agree with Dirk, the lady's got some issues she can't control. However, no one's laughing in her presence and everyone's making an effort to keep a straight face. It's still bad to laugh behind her back but I would not condemn it. After all, she makes them endure and the least they can do is get some laughs out of it later. It's all about balance. Without balance we're lost. Nice little story by the way. I enjoyed it. I've been in retailing too, but only for a brief 3 weeks. Keep it up.

Title article: Decaying Angel
Date: 2008-03-20 01:31:07

Great flow and wonderful choice of words. I love the images that you managed to convey so well. Keep it up.

Title article: The Perfect Girlfriend
Date: 2008-03-19 08:29:02

Wow. I am not quite sure what to say. I realized half-way that she wasn't real and yet I was still caught off guard at the end. Well-written. Interesting, in a dark way :)))

Title article: The Last Days of Man
Date: 2008-03-19 04:58:29

Intriguing story. You've got some really good ideas but I feel they need more developing. As I read through it, I felt that more cause-effect relationships should be given so as to provide a better understanding of everything that's going on. At present, it seems to me like bits and pieces. All in all, it was a nice read. Keep it up.

Title article: Clichés (part 1)
Date: 2008-03-19 01:23:46

good style, interesting read. will be waiting for part 2. keep it up.

Title article: End of Minds (part five)
Date: 2008-03-18 07:25:12

Dirk, the whole series was absolutely insane man. Beautiful writing, amazing ideas. I love it so much. I wanna bear your children :)))))

Title article: A Portrait by a Poor Artist
Date: 2008-02-10 07:41:29

Beautiful letter. Too bad no one is happy in the end. But that's what happens when you seek happiness outside yourself.

Title article: The Voice
Date: 2008-02-10 03:56:18

I really enjoyed reading this. Most of all, I liked Satan's personality. I think it's really suitable. Good work. Keep it up.

Title article: Savior
Date: 2008-02-10 01:32:51

Good read. But, I would have really liked to know what made the father snap like that.

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Created On: 02/05/2008 10:02:21

How do you do it? How is it that you make such unique and great stories? You sir, are magnificent!

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