A Purple Dusk

A truck drives out through the flat bottom lands...

The Letter

He couldn't believe it. He looked down at the...

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About Myself: Smash mouth Reviewer.

I dream of one day becoming a romance novelist.

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Christian Wright (The 13th)

 Created On: 02/15/2008 07:16:18
I thought you left for good, it's good to have you back.Don't always agree with your views but you're entitled to them.
Marisa Herrera (Reese)

 Created On: 02/12/2008 14:56:14
Hey. I see you want to one day become a a romance novelist and I say go for it. Also, try out your work on us. I'm sure we'll love your work.

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Title article: I am Woman (Hear me Roar)
Date: 2008-02-01 06:58:07
guys,,stand up and fight.
Is this a dig on us guys...if it is then I understood every line this poem was saying except junk is treasure wrongs can pleasure. For this site I give it a 5...but can we be really sure what you were trying to say...can u

Title article: December 23
Date: 2008-01-31 12:27:43
hate to be mean.
This story made absolutly no sense to me. The there..thier..they're.. problem as the other commentor suggested is the least of your problems...I would recommend a writing class at a local college.

Title article: I Am Sand
Date: 2008-01-29 13:06:23

not realy sure what the point to this was.

Title article: A Valentine for Ellie
Date: 2008-01-29 09:49:44
sorry
The story itself was not confusing at all, didn't mean that at all. It was a really good story about one's hatred for that special day. But why share with the masses a message meant for one special guy. Actually, i'm being petty. I'll re-rate this story a 5...on story alone.

Title article: Insane
Date: 2008-01-29 09:06:21
actually
I just assume it was her daughter...perhaps not

Title article: Insane
Date: 2008-01-29 09:03:14
Great poem
..and yes, I understood that this was someone talking with a shrink about someone... her daughter in this case. Not sure what the adhesive line was about...a band-aid? anyway...gave it a 5 on style.

Title article: A Valentine for Ellie
Date: 2008-01-29 08:45:11
hmmmm
Seems like there is a hidden message of a personal kind in this story. Who is the mystery man whom you left a clue with..1..4..3..certainly not I. But a sad story with a confusing end. By the way,,,I hate birthday's. Gave it a 4 because of it's ending.

Title article: Chili Fries and Shakes
Date: 2008-01-29 07:37:22
Good
Good story but with some grammar error's. A couple other things as I saw them; I don't believe the few lines talking about his mother was nessesary unless you conveyed to the reader just what was up with her, an affair I assume. Also, was that the reason your father drank. You left the reader to interpret this story themselves' ..poems yes, story, a no no. I gave this a 4... A 'B' in school terms.

Title article: And the Granfather Clock Strikes Again
Date: 2008-01-29 06:56:58
ok
A little perplexed. Was it twelve midnight or did a twelve hour period pass him by. I would hope he didn't stare all those hours at the clock instead of calling for help, but the poem read that way to me. I know,the teacher being a bit anal. I get that a lot. 
...a 4 by the way

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