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Chad Lawson (My Opinion)
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About Myself: Smash mouth Reviewer.

I dream of one day becoming a romance novelist.

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Christian Wright (The 13th)

 Created On: 02/15/2008 07:16:18
I thought you left for good, it's good to have you back.Don't always agree with your views but you're entitled to them.
Marisa Herrera (Reese)

 Created On: 02/12/2008 14:56:14
Hey. I see you want to one day become a a romance novelist and I say go for it. Also, try out your work on us. I'm sure we'll love your work.

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Title article: Don't Scream
Date: 2008-02-05 10:03:48
typical woman
You could have at least given him your phone number dear. To me this story could have been so much more. More discriptive to bring the reader inside your very shoe's. It was a nice story and you seem to have a lot of potential. a '4'

Title article: The Inevitable Journey
Date: 2008-02-05 09:48:41
Liked this
This was a great idea for a short lil story. Good job...caught me off guard, I like that. a '5'

Title article: So Cold
Date: 2008-02-05 09:39:02

The story of a gun; told by a gun. This story was the perfect length in size. I mean, what else could it say. It was told well and written well to convey to the reader just what exactly was speaking and what ultimately happened to it's owner. For what it was, I thought it was good. But I'm sure you have better. I'll give it a four

Title article: Who am I ?
Date: 2008-02-05 09:08:13

This was really not a story but a political message, and one that needs to be addressed. Try fiction next up. Nice message.

Title article: The Darkness
Date: 2008-02-05 08:59:00
this was
a great story if you are 13 or younger, if your older then this you should take classes on writing, and there is a really neato thing called spellcheck. The story really made no sense...sorry. Don't let this comment discourage you. Keep working and take my advice.

Title article: The Future
Date: 2008-02-05 08:47:33
not sure
whether to laugh or cry. We'll, I know I won't laugh; cause it wasn't that funny, so I guess i'll cry. 
One last thing...is couldn't've a word.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-05 08:31:22
let me just say
What everyone else on this site seems to be afraid of doing... given a bad comment. Really, what was the point to this. It looks like it was written and thought of by a 5 year old...and it wasn't even funny...at least to some one on a mature level.

Title article: Our Building Torn Apart
Date: 2008-02-04 16:07:19

Not sure what to make of this. If you were to take all these words and scramble them, and then put them back randomly...I might umderstand it better. Site's toughest critic

Title article: Armyworm Wars
Date: 2008-02-01 07:20:56
good
Cute story...a 5 for you my dear.

Title article: The Volatile Toilet
Date: 2008-02-01 07:05:38
funny
Sounds like a lawsuit, dropping you on your head like that. Thought it was funny, however, not sure the last line warrants a laugh. gave it a 5 cause i'm in a good mood today.

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