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Chad Lawson (My Opinion)
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About Myself: Smash mouth Reviewer.

I dream of one day becoming a romance novelist.

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Christian Wright (The 13th)

 Created On: 02/15/2008 07:16:18
I thought you left for good, it's good to have you back.Don't always agree with your views but you're entitled to them.
Marisa Herrera (Reese)

 Created On: 02/12/2008 14:56:14
Hey. I see you want to one day become a a romance novelist and I say go for it. Also, try out your work on us. I'm sure we'll love your work.

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Title article: Embrace
Date: 2008-02-08 13:30:19
scrathing my head
Half way through I kinda got lost. No offense.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-08 08:07:42
You know,
as many times as you have viewed this incredible story, one would think you would have corrected the last sentence already. I believe you were trying to say, (I'm) running short of breath, but thats being petty... but then, aren't we all.

Title article: Happiness at Last
Date: 2008-02-07 14:09:40
nicely done
Great poem, you have captivated me.

Title article: Malachi
Date: 2008-02-07 13:47:46
good
Well written story and thought provoking

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-07 13:39:21
wow
It seems I have stirred up some emotions. This was never my intent. Just to be honest as I saw it. I apologize if I have hurt any feelings. Though I believe The author of this fabulous tale should thank me for making it quite a hot topic. I will try to be more helpful and less hurtful in the future, and also keep in mind, the greatest advice you could take, is listen when it is given you.

Title article: The Death Of A Man
Date: 2008-02-07 11:18:38
hmmm
I'll be nice and leave this one alone.

Title article: She Loved Him
Date: 2008-02-07 11:15:14
soppy
Ok,,we get the picture...she loved him. Just one question...WHY!!! Also, why did you kill yourself? You claim it was because you couldn't live without him...well it reads that he never left you to begin with. Not sure about this one. Should of realized by line 5 that it never was gonna love you or that it would have worked. JUST LEAVE.

Title article: Online Predator
Date: 2008-02-07 10:57:50
My gosh
I'm speechless.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-06 06:17:11
ok
I'm in awe, you all noticed my error's. No, I am no English major, nor do I claim to be one, Infact, I am not a critic at all. I'm just someone who will point out an obvious when everyone else is afraid to do so. I will never tell you or anyone they are a terrible writer, just that maybe a class or two might really be beneficial. It's great that everyone claims brilliance on every story, but is that fair to the thirteen year old who you will mislead. Someone who love's to write but see's no reason for improvement. This site I believe was not set up as a kiss ass site, as Baethan Dawn appears to be with you. I shall change my user name to "my opinion" to apease those who do not like my honesty... as I see it. Maybe I'm being to harsh on a story that is clearly pointless, and a story obviously that was put up as a joke. I have read a lot of great stories from poeple who are amatures that have great potential, and I let them know.

Title article: Too Late
Date: 2008-02-05 10:25:16
yea
I thought it was good. Kinda simple in nature however. Btw...It's Dying...not Dieing

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