The Beast and the Wicked Witch

tale as old as time true as it can be She...

The exotic tales of a pink skunk and a cucumber, Chapter 76

The stormy night made the skunk restless and...

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About Myself: Smash mouth Reviewer.

I dream of one day becoming a romance novelist.

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Christian Wright (The 13th)

 Created On: 02/15/2008 07:16:18
I thought you left for good, it's good to have you back.Don't always agree with your views but you're entitled to them.
Marisa Herrera (Reese)

 Created On: 02/12/2008 14:56:14
Hey. I see you want to one day become a a romance novelist and I say go for it. Also, try out your work on us. I'm sure we'll love your work.

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Title article: Hell on Earth (Intro)
Date: 2008-02-09 11:45:04
ok
Interesting story. The comma's after the word 'but' seem out of place. I would put a period after the word that comes before it, then use a comma after 'but'. Also, Interesting concept of the sun being set on fire. Anyway, fun little read.

Title article: The Future
Date: 2008-02-09 10:47:51

I accept your point. Don't want another enemy.

Title article: Headhunt
Date: 2008-02-09 10:37:22
nice job
Your profile indicates your desire to be a writer. Well Mr. Todd your well on your way. Nice piece of writing. But where did the glider come from, or the canoe, and who wired the water with the trap. I have to believe our hero did all this, but you just never made it clear.

Title article: The Future
Date: 2008-02-09 10:04:33
Got me
ok...you got me on effecientcy. You and I share in the fact that we butcher the English language.

Title article: Mistake
Date: 2008-02-09 07:15:14
ok
I am really confused with this story. The last 3 paragraphs have me scratching my head. Who was Faith? Maybe you can explain. Was she hit by the car following the hearst? or the night Holly was killed.

Title article: "???"
Date: 2008-02-09 06:49:28
5 stars
I liked this poem about a writers ill fated torture. My suggestion is that you take out the 2nd to last line.(Why did you hide)..we realize they can't be found already) For some reason, it takes a mature sounding poem and brings it down a notch..just my opinion.

Title article: Unfaithful Life
Date: 2008-02-09 06:39:03

I have a few things to say about this story. After reading your profile and seeing that you are 15, I am quite impressed with you young man. You have a more mature way of writing then a few of the older patrons on this site. It's ashame God is only viewed as a hateful entity here, but I realized the nature of your character. Well done in painting the picture of the main character. You never made it clear how he fell 1000 feet...thats about 80 to 90 stories up,,,no biggie but I was just scratching my head, you never mentioned as you told of his journey home he lived in such a high builing...maybe I just read it wrong...also the article in the paper just didn't come off as believeable. Good job overall.

Title article: Skin & Bones
Date: 2008-02-08 16:06:20
Honestly
This is just a pointless perverted story that belongs on the back page of some girlie magazine. Does your mother know you talk like this Clinton. Well, if she did, she would be ashamed. Stories come across so much more effectivly without the flagarent use of curse...no no no ,,ugly words.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-02-08 13:50:01
wow
You really are a kiss ass to her, she just can not any wrong in your eyes..lol..are you one in the same..I wonder. Hey,,I think were close to the top of most discussed... and for this story,,or blurb,,can you believe it.

Title article: Ladies First
Date: 2008-02-08 13:46:37
neat read
I saw this on the latest comments, so I thought I give it a read...Mr. Munky, you intrigue me. You have a great story telling mind...but...whats up with the title, it has no relevence to the story within. The Dialogue between the two captive's was easily understood. A tad confusing I'll grant at the end. But after reading your comment, I see where you wanted to take the reader. I think you took them there.

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