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Smash mouth Reviewer.

I dream of one day becoming a romance novelist.

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Total number of comments: 68

Title article: The Night Owl
Date: 2008-02-16 10:32:37

cute
Kinda simple but fun. Its easy to log in and pull up porn site after porn site and waste so much time..............that is,,so ive been told...cough cough.

Title article: The House of Grimm Presents:THE BITE
Date: 2008-02-16 10:22:16

thank you
Thank god it wasn't a vampire either. This world doesn't need another vampire/zombie tale...again, just my opinion.

Title article: A Love Note
Date: 2008-02-16 10:17:42

ahhhh
If life could be so simple. Unfortunatly in real life, pride and all that stuff usually get in the way of a really nice relationship. Good story little Salliy

Title article: Julie
Date: 2008-02-16 10:12:19

the living dead
Another zombie story...sorry, just don't like zombie stuff...just thought you would want to know.

Title article: Flying to Mars
Date: 2008-02-16 10:08:09

rocket man
I take it, he's just wishful thinking. not sure if he actually gonna go to mars, kinda hard to get there...and then theres why, dude, go to fiji,,,might have idiocies, but at least there will be hotties.

Title article: The Breakup Dream
Date: 2008-02-16 09:59:02

Confused. Was she talking in her sleep or was this three seperate entries by the two. Not really a story submitted on 'storiesville'..hence the name.

Title article: the shadow
Date: 2008-02-16 09:54:37

scratching
question, what exactly do you have against commas. The lack of use made it impossible to relate to this story. But I'm not sure even with them that it would have made much sense. I know you have good stories in ya,,,I just don"t think this was one of them... p.s..next time submit in plain print.

Title article: All in Good Faith
Date: 2008-02-14 17:35:11

deep
Very well said, Although I don't agree with some of your points, I will cast no dispersions in your direction. Is this a work of fiction, or your own thoughts... just curious. I would point out however that you should look up the word paragraph and see what it means. Overall, I found this (may I say article) very interesting, and I enjoyed reading it.

Title article: Case Open
Date: 2008-02-14 15:02:13

well
you ask me to review a story of yours and this is the one I picked. First of all, there are many grammar errors and misspelled words. pushing that aside, the story was good and you have upside, keep writing. But watch how your sentences run into each other. Punctuation is your friend, learn to use them properly. It can help convey emotion and attitude of your characters to the reader...thus making this story even better. I will read other things from you. I can see that talent is bursting to get out.

Title article: Silence Black Ball 8
Date: 2008-02-09 11:57:13

double take
I'm lost...please explain.

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Christian Wright (The 13th)	Created On: 02/15/2008 07:16:18 I thought you left for good, it's good to have you back.Don't always agree with your views but you're entitled to them.
Marisa Herrera (Reese)	Created On: 02/12/2008 14:56:14 Hey. I see you want to one day become a a romance novelist and I say go for it. Also, try out your work on us. I'm sure we'll love your work.

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