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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	10/07/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Lastly, some of my poems might even offend you because of the subjects i oppose within them. I personally feel like this country is going in the complete opposite direction of what is right...and I won't call myself an American anymore. I will not be accused for what this country does to itself. And I am surely not proud, and won't protect a flag that stands for nothing it foolishly preaches. Ending on that note, I'll leave you with a poem by one of my favorite poets, Saul Williams.

They say that I am a poet.
I wonder what they would say
If they saw me
From the inside.
I bottle emotions
And place them into the sea
For others to unbottle
On distant shores
I am unsure as to whether
They ever reach and for that matter
As to whether
I ever get my point across
Or my love

-From a true poet, Saul Williams

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 7, 2008	What Ever Is To Come	Poetry	17
Oct 5, 2008	Through This Mirror	Poetry	80
Oct 4, 2008	Ripples	Poetry	72
Oct 1, 2008	I Will Lay In Vain	Poetry	173
Sep 30, 2008	There You Are	Poetry	96
Sep 28, 2008	A Subway Car	Poetry	107
Sep 22, 2008	Ashes (Reconstructed)	Poetry	189
Sep 20, 2008	Bleeding Sea	Poetry	112
Sep 16, 2008	A Twilight Sky	Poetry	353
Sep 13, 2008	A New Beginning	Poetry	114
Sep 11, 2008	To My Recognition	Poetry	110
Sep 8, 2008	House of Cards	Poetry	106
Sep 6, 2008	Through Open Eyes	Poetry	198
Sep 3, 2008	Where I Belong	Poetry	103
Aug 30, 2008	A Long Time Ago	Poetry	148
Aug 26, 2008	Will We Meet Again?	Poetry	140
Aug 23, 2008	It All Seems A Million Miles Away	Poetry	113
Aug 19, 2008	Dedication	Poetry	141
Aug 18, 2008	Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise	Poetry	348
Aug 16, 2008	Losing Everything	Poetry	171

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Comments

Title article: The headline
Date: 2008-10-01 17:58:09

well some of this was alright...but most of this i didn't care for.

Title article: Autumn Comes Again
Date: 2008-10-01 17:40:21

you definitely have an amazing way with words....you're descriptions are beautiful and you always know how to relate to the real world, i thought this was good.
and i also liked the little bit of rhyme that was evident in this.

Title article: Photograph
Date: 2008-10-01 17:36:38

pretty sad and gloomy. but i thought this was written well. you were able to draw me into the story seamlessly. but it is amazing how one can fall in love with a vision, a ghost that just isn't there.

Title article: Not one tear
Date: 2008-10-01 17:30:29

yes, i did think this was done exceptionally well. and in this, none of the rhymes really seemed force. everything seems to have its rightful place. i liked this.

Title article: He Said She Said
Date: 2008-09-30 15:49:16

well good for her!!! i was fearing that she might actually give in to Jamal at the end but then she gave him what he really did deserve. yea, changing the fonts was a nice idea.
good story!

Title article: Dark Light
Date: 2008-09-30 15:43:33

this was captivating from the start....but by now, i am no longer expecting anything less from your poetry....you really have the talent down.
the last stanza was my favorite.

Title article: The Great Gender Divide...
Date: 2008-09-30 15:40:46

i'll be honest and say i didn't really care for this. i could tell just by reading the first couple lines, that you are capable of writing well.
but this specific piece just bored me to tears.

Title article: An Unexamined Life
Date: 2008-09-30 15:37:43

very interesting. you definitely have a talent for writing. you have a way with characters because Astrid and even Jason i could picture in my head pretty vividly. i thought it was neat also how you made Astrid contradict herself at the end. she really took a turn for the worse in her older years, but she couldn't even accept it.

Title article: Offering
Date: 2008-09-30 15:31:02

wow...very dark indeed. and i thought you pulled this off pretty well although the flow was off for me. all in all though pretty cool.

Title article: Breakdown
Date: 2008-09-30 15:26:59

i really enjoyed this story. your writing in this particular piece was really suave. and the story held together very well all the way through. no wonder they called Jeremy the super interrogater.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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