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Luckily the bus stop is near where she lives and is...

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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	10/15/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Lastly, some of my poems might even offend you because of the subjects i oppose within them. I personally feel like this country is going in the complete opposite direction of what is right...and I won't call myself an American anymore. I will not be accused for what this country does to itself. And I am surely not proud, and won't protect a flag that stands for nothing it foolishly preaches.

What a day may bring, a day may take away. -Thomas Fuller

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 14, 2008	Cold December Day	Poetry	80
Oct 13, 2008	One Day	Poetry	125
Oct 9, 2008	Please Know	Poetry	70
Oct 7, 2008	What Ever Is To Come	Poetry	91
Oct 5, 2008	Through This Mirror	Poetry	144
Oct 4, 2008	Ripples	Poetry	156
Oct 1, 2008	I Will Lay In Vain	Poetry	286
Sep 30, 2008	There You Are	Poetry	108
Sep 28, 2008	A Subway Car	Poetry	121
Sep 22, 2008	Ashes (Reconstructed)	Poetry	207
Sep 20, 2008	Bleeding Sea	Poetry	117
Sep 16, 2008	A Twilight Sky	Poetry	377
Sep 13, 2008	A New Beginning	Poetry	127
Sep 11, 2008	To My Recognition	Poetry	118
Sep 8, 2008	House of Cards	Poetry	113
Sep 6, 2008	Through Open Eyes	Poetry	203
Sep 3, 2008	Where I Belong	Poetry	112
Aug 30, 2008	A Long Time Ago	Poetry	154
Aug 26, 2008	Will We Meet Again?	Poetry	146
Aug 23, 2008	It All Seems A Million Miles Away	Poetry	127

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Comments

Title article: It's a Matter of Importance
Date: 2008-10-11 17:48:59

this was alright. i mean it was just a guy and a girl having sex...is there really anything else to this? not that i could see. and how many times i have heard that line (the world dissolving around them) i've heard that so many times. but i'll agree somewhat on how you didn't let this go to pornography in a way...some of it was just crude i felt. but i did like the ending. it ended nicely.

Title article: NONE 1957.
Date: 2008-10-11 17:40:02

once again, i felt like i was inside this character's mind, seeing everything so vividly of what she was decribing.

Title article: So Crazy
Date: 2008-10-11 16:25:40

some of the blue poetry was confusing and hard to understand and a few times i did catch myself getting hung up on your broken up english....but in the end i was able to understand the story and i found it interesting. a little familiar to me personally, in a way. but overall, a nice job. just try the best you can to watch your English.

Title article: A Workplace Haiku
Date: 2008-10-11 16:17:49

eh. i just didn't really care for this. i think it was the subject matter. just uninteresting to me.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-11 09:07:42

fantasy...alright. whatever. forgive me for just giving my opinion...because it seems like everyone else just desecrated on it afterwards.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-08 18:16:57

eh i didn't really care for this chapter....this seems to be getting a little too farfetch'd now for my liking. and it seemed like you didn't know where to go with this chapter.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-10-08 18:12:19

odd...very odd...something like this happening in reality i seriously doubt....but i still am entertained..and that's all that matters!!

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-10-08 18:07:52

hmmm i don't think i've ever read anything as weird as this.
haha but i do like it....and your writing and dialogue...it's very good.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-08 18:01:47

i'm not one to really enjoy these chapters of writing everybody finds necessary to write every once in awhile...but the title seemed interesting so i gave it a try....and i have to say i really enjoyed this first chapter. you definitely have a talent for writing and it showed clearly in the beginning here.
i do like how i have no idea where this is going to go....well, continuing on!!

Title article: GHOST BABY.
Date: 2008-10-08 17:49:35

a heartfelt poem that was beautifully done. it is cool to me how you are able to write depressing poems, but then you are also able to write very touching pieces as well.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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