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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	10/09/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Lastly, some of my poems might even offend you because of the subjects i oppose within them. I personally feel like this country is going in the complete opposite direction of what is right...and I won't call myself an American anymore. I will not be accused for what this country does to itself. And I am surely not proud, and won't protect a flag that stands for nothing it foolishly preaches. Ending on that note, I'll leave you with a poem by one of my favorite poets, Saul Williams.

They say that I am a poet.
I wonder what they would say
If they saw me
From the inside.
I bottle emotions
And place them into the sea
For others to unbottle
On distant shores
I am unsure as to whether
They ever reach and for that matter
As to whether
I ever get my point across
Or my love

-From a true poet, Saul Williams

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 9, 2008	Please Know	Poetry	38
Oct 7, 2008	What Ever Is To Come	Poetry	76
Oct 5, 2008	Through This Mirror	Poetry	112
Oct 4, 2008	Ripples	Poetry	101
Oct 1, 2008	I Will Lay In Vain	Poetry	217
Sep 30, 2008	There You Are	Poetry	100
Sep 28, 2008	A Subway Car	Poetry	110
Sep 22, 2008	Ashes (Reconstructed)	Poetry	198
Sep 20, 2008	Bleeding Sea	Poetry	113
Sep 16, 2008	A Twilight Sky	Poetry	353
Sep 13, 2008	A New Beginning	Poetry	118
Sep 11, 2008	To My Recognition	Poetry	111
Sep 8, 2008	House of Cards	Poetry	108
Sep 6, 2008	Through Open Eyes	Poetry	199
Sep 3, 2008	Where I Belong	Poetry	105
Aug 30, 2008	A Long Time Ago	Poetry	151
Aug 26, 2008	Will We Meet Again?	Poetry	142
Aug 23, 2008	It All Seems A Million Miles Away	Poetry	118
Aug 19, 2008	Dedication	Poetry	146
Aug 18, 2008	Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise	Poetry	350

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Comments

Title article: Marionette
Date: 2008-10-05 20:11:59

liked every part of this. no line seemed out of place or dull. everything was very sharp and precise. i do hope to read more from you.

Title article: It's Only Life
Date: 2008-10-05 20:09:13

the above comment was made by me.
sorry, for having to make another comment.

Title article: Through
Date: 2008-10-05 20:02:47

i can't recall of a time where i read one of your pieces without thinking it was beautifully done! and this was no exception. very seamless and thought provoking. it's a shame though, you haven't visited any of my stuff for a long time....i miss your comments. eh, maybe you think my work is no longer relovant to read.

Title article: The Search
Date: 2008-10-05 15:03:25

i found myself enjoying every bit of this poem. there wasn't a thing wrong anywhere. well done!! i really enjoyed the ending too.

Title article: In Uniform
Date: 2008-10-05 15:00:31

again, this was very good. i really liked how you kept the uniform theme throughout. and the scenes you described...you described beautifully, there was no perversion.

Title article: For the Second Time Around(The notebook imprved vrsion)
Date: 2008-10-05 14:56:34

oh, don't be so hard on yourself. i read this and i'm not disappointed with it. for being Asian, i'd say your english is pretty decent...and the spelling really didn't create a huge conflict with me anyway....it was a touching story, but i felt like there wasn't enough elaboration...there wasn't enough of a story i guess is what i'm trying to say. but i hope you really do continue to write. for a first attempt, this is good. i've seen so much worse.

Title article: Ashes To Ashes
Date: 2008-10-05 14:51:16

very good short story. it did envoke alot of thought. but it actually frightened me a little bit about my end. just the fact that there is so much uncertainty surrounding life after my death.

Title article: why arent you
Date: 2008-10-05 14:46:47

i'll just rate this five stars because the flow was very good. everything held together well.
but, this does absolutely nothing to change my views.
same old pride that i've seen a million times before.

Title article: Bar Love
Date: 2008-10-05 14:42:56

my thoughts are pretty much in sync with Hodders on this. so i won't repeat.

Title article: Caught Up In Between
Date: 2008-10-05 14:30:14

thank you very much.
it means alot to me, that you are taking the time to read an older piece of mine.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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