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She doesn't sleep well that night. Obviously...

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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	10/13/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Lastly, some of my poems might even offend you because of the subjects i oppose within them. I personally feel like this country is going in the complete opposite direction of what is right...and I won't call myself an American anymore. I will not be accused for what this country does to itself. And I am surely not proud, and won't protect a flag that stands for nothing it foolishly preaches. Ending on that note, I'll leave you with a couple of quotes from some famous writers.

A wind has blown the rain away and blown the sky away, and the trees stand. I think, too, have known autumn too long. - E.E. Cummings

We loved with a love that was more than love. -Poe

And nothing to look backward to with pride, and nothing to look forward to with hope. -Robert Frost

If society fits you comfortably enough, you call it freedom. -Robert Frost

Let the rain kiss you. Let the rain beat upon your head with silver liquid drops. Let the rain sing you a lullaby.
-Langston Hughes

Life is just a series of trying to make up your mind. -Timothy Fuller

Unhappiness is not knowing what we want and killing ourselves to get it.
-Don Herold

No love, no friendship can cross the path of our destiny without leaving some mark on it forever. -Francois

What a day may bring, a day may take away. -Thomas Fuller

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 13, 2008	One Day	Poetry	74
Oct 9, 2008	Please Know	Poetry	61
Oct 7, 2008	What Ever Is To Come	Poetry	87
Oct 5, 2008	Through This Mirror	Poetry	144
Oct 4, 2008	Ripples	Poetry	139
Oct 1, 2008	I Will Lay In Vain	Poetry	262
Sep 30, 2008	There You Are	Poetry	107
Sep 28, 2008	A Subway Car	Poetry	117
Sep 22, 2008	Ashes (Reconstructed)	Poetry	205
Sep 20, 2008	Bleeding Sea	Poetry	117
Sep 16, 2008	A Twilight Sky	Poetry	370
Sep 13, 2008	A New Beginning	Poetry	127
Sep 11, 2008	To My Recognition	Poetry	117
Sep 8, 2008	House of Cards	Poetry	113
Sep 6, 2008	Through Open Eyes	Poetry	203
Sep 3, 2008	Where I Belong	Poetry	109
Aug 30, 2008	A Long Time Ago	Poetry	153
Aug 26, 2008	Will We Meet Again?	Poetry	146
Aug 23, 2008	It All Seems A Million Miles Away	Poetry	126
Aug 19, 2008	Dedication	Poetry	150

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1175

Title article: Mind Over Matter
Date: 2008-10-13 20:42:48

i did enjoy this all the way through. you did a great job keeping the story entertaining...you didn't let it trail off into a bore. and luke i thought, was very well portrayed for the slime that he was. i'm glad he got what he deserved in the end.
good story.

Title article: Fallout
Date: 2008-10-13 16:30:06

well i do like your imagination and i do think this story that you have in your mind could be a good one....but as it is written currently...i didn't really like it. it seemed rushed and there wasn't enough of a story.

Title article: Only Moments and Hours
Date: 2008-10-13 16:26:09

i thought this was very well done. you painted pictures of distant memories in a very elegant and interesting way.

Title article: Dyslexia
Date: 2008-10-13 16:23:32

yes, frustration and hate against the laughing masses was very evident here and i think you did a great job with describing it.
and i like how you kept the whole "normal" thing throughout the piece...in my opinion, there is no such thing as normal. like allmine said, we are all unique in our own ways.

Title article: My Day At Work
Date: 2008-10-13 16:14:25

i guess you did want to make this dull because of the job itself being dull...but this was just painfully boring to read....although i have to say, you described your job in the most unique of ways.

Title article: moneyed faces
Date: 2008-10-13 16:11:10

i really enjoyed the last stanza and the last line was perfect...but i felt like the other stanzas were weaker. they didn't hold as much emotion for me.

Title article: VESPERS 1967.
Date: 2008-10-13 16:08:07

so many thoughts being recalled here. i found it interesting. the overall feel of this was nice too.

Title article: When I Think of You
Date: 2008-10-12 20:45:17

yea....i liked this one. very cool poem. i could feel the drenching, sad tone that you so effectively conveyed and the last line was the perfect closer..and the red font was a nice touch as well.

Title article: A Simple Misunderstanding
Date: 2008-10-12 17:54:40

i thought this was good. although in my opinion, everything went a little too fast. i think this could have been better if you would have stretched it out.

Title article: It's a Matter of Importance
Date: 2008-10-12 17:48:07

yea Yellowcat has a point...i had forgotten that while i read it but that part didn't make sense...she thought he was just using her.....but then she goes and makes herself available anyway??
unless she just couldn not control her urge..i don't know.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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