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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

Lastly, I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. Almost everything I write could be associated with depression or sadness. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Also if you're like me in any way as far as disliking the world we live in as of now then take a look at some of these websites......

www.greenpeace.org
www.crisis.org
www.planetsave.com
www.worldvision.org
www.maketradefair.com

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 4, 2008	I'm Closer To Nothing	Poetry	117
Jun 2, 2008	Road of Blood	Poetry	107
Jun 1, 2008	Purple Haze	Miscellaneous Stories	239
Jun 1, 2008	Just A Rainy Day	Poetry	133
May 31, 2008	Spent The Day With An Angel	Poetry	124
May 29, 2008	These Prayers of Mine	Poetry	127
May 27, 2008	I Pledge Allegiance	Poetry	129
May 24, 2008	Sun Beams	Poetry	139
May 24, 2008	For There Is Nothing Up Above	Poetry	106
May 22, 2008	Broken Flesh	Poetry	107
May 20, 2008	To Get Nowhere	Poetry	113
May 18, 2008	My Immaturity	Miscellaneous Stories	175
May 15, 2008	Fragile Thoughts	Poetry	143
May 15, 2008	Bring Me Down	Poetry	157
May 13, 2008	All Along	Poetry	124
May 12, 2008	Blue to Black	Poetry	130
May 11, 2008	Gravity	Poetry	146
May 11, 2008	The Loyal Soldier	Poetry	115
May 9, 2008	Messenger of Hope	Poetry	163
May 7, 2008	Depleted	Poetry	137

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Comments

Total number of comments: 956

Title article: Rage
Date: 2008-09-06 18:47:44

i thought this was a great swift message. i liked the fact that it was very short, but you still were able to get its point all the same.

Title article: Claustrophobia
Date: 2008-09-06 17:49:26

i really enjoyed this story....especially the ending, it was very disturbing. but eh, i have a fear of enclosed spaces as well, i absolutely HATE elevators haha. but hopefully i won't end up like Douglas!

Title article: LIKE A CRAZY BIRD.
Date: 2008-09-06 17:34:31

there wasn't much text to this, but i had no problem with figuring out what kind of person Ruby was. you always paint your characters so well.

Title article: Things aren't always as they appear
Date: 2008-09-06 17:30:56

call me out of place...but i just couldn't get into this story. it was boring to me. and i got confused between the characters. i like your pieces usually, i guess this one just didn't appeal to me.

Title article: A Ghetto Story
Date: 2008-09-06 13:57:32

i think this was very powerful in every single aspect. honesty, yea i know has been mentioned twice...but it's really what glimmered here. a story well told for sure.

Title article: My Best Teacher
Date: 2008-09-06 13:47:59

yea i think it's impossible to not remember any of your past school teachers while reading this. this actually sparked a memory in my mind, when my computer teacher started crying in front of the whole classroom. at the time, i was astonished at her tears and still have no idea of what to even think of it!
but as far as the story..it was good, but i felt like there were too many words and i got caught in them while i was reading.

Title article: The Monkey
Date: 2008-09-06 13:36:23

your writing abilities are very commendable for sure. i was astonished by how well you were able to make this story attractive and appealing with the words and descriptions that you chose. in the end, it was a very weird story, but weird is sometimes good.

Title article: Sometimes It Still Hurts
Date: 2008-09-06 13:19:48

i completely agree with Harmattan in that you should really make your abuse known to anyone who can help you.....you cannot let these filth get away with what they did to you. i can't even fathom what you had to go through, how you were degraded in such a cruel, unspeakable way. and it's probably hard, but yes your mother in my mind is not a mother at all. she is a piece of trash. and she deserves to be punished just like your imitation of a father does. do not ever be your mother's friend. you must never let her in because she doesn't deserve it. i'm sorry i probably sound really rude, but it just angers me to the extreme to know a human being can be treated this way...and then the inflictors get no punishment...that's insane!! you must help yourself.
you must make the past right by speaking up about it. and lastly, i wish you the complete best. i just wish there was something I could do.....all i can do is hope you mend as much of yourself back together as possible.

Title article: A dream of nowhere
Date: 2008-09-06 11:23:07

great wording and content with this!! i think it is nice sometimes, to be able to leave this world behind for a little while...but it's even nicer if you're able to do it with someone else. and you definitely brought that emotion forth.

Title article: Sparing the Rod
Date: 2008-09-06 11:17:24

good message, Phil. i'm not sure if i can relate to this as much as some of the other people on here...but i still was able to grasp what you were saying and you said it well.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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