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Last Online	10/12/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Lastly, some of my poems might even offend you because of the subjects i oppose within them. I personally feel like this country is going in the complete opposite direction of what is right...and I won't call myself an American anymore. I will not be accused for what this country does to itself. And I am surely not proud, and won't protect a flag that stands for nothing it foolishly preaches. Ending on that note, I'll leave you with a poem by one of my favorite poets, Saul Williams.

They say that I am a poet.
I wonder what they would say
If they saw me
From the inside.
I bottle emotions
And place them into the sea
For others to unbottle
On distant shores
I am unsure as to whether
They ever reach and for that matter
As to whether
I ever get my point across
Or my love

-From a true poet, Saul Williams

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Mar 16, 2008	Alcohol	Poetry	453
Mar 15, 2008	Solitude	Poetry	191
Mar 15, 2008	Mockery	Poetry	170
Mar 15, 2008	Whore	Poetry	228
Mar 15, 2008	Letting Everything Fall	Poetry	176
Mar 14, 2008	Slave	Poetry	181
Mar 14, 2008	Choices	Poetry	161
Mar 13, 2008	Can't Take This Anymore	Poetry	155
Mar 12, 2008	Beautiful America	Poetry	254
Mar 12, 2008	Sight Seeing	Poetry	219
Mar 11, 2008	Peaceful Apparitions	Poetry	180
Mar 11, 2008	Relief From the Cold	Poetry	173
Mar 9, 2008	Scientist	Poetry	191
Mar 9, 2008	Identity	Poetry	195
Mar 8, 2008	Filling A Void	Poetry	212
Mar 6, 2008	Razorblade	Poetry	239
Mar 5, 2008	Everything Becomes Still	Poetry	196
Mar 4, 2008	Conceited	Poetry	191
Feb 29, 2008	Endless Rain	Poetry	249
Feb 28, 2008	Futile	Poetry	207

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1166

Title article: When I Think of You
Date: 2008-10-12 20:45:17

yea....i liked this one. very cool poem. i could feel the drenching, sad tone that you so effectively conveyed and the last line was the perfect closer..and the red font was a nice touch as well.

Title article: A Simple Misunderstanding
Date: 2008-10-12 17:54:40

i thought this was good. although in my opinion, everything went a little too fast. i think this could have been better if you would have stretched it out.

Title article: It's a Matter of Importance
Date: 2008-10-12 17:48:07

yea Yellowcat has a point...i had forgotten that while i read it but that part didn't make sense...she thought he was just using her.....but then she goes and makes herself available anyway??
unless she just couldn not control her urge..i don't know.

Title article: The World We Live
Date: 2008-10-12 17:44:08

well then i guess the channel you're watching must be out of focus.

Title article: May
Date: 2008-10-11 18:30:04

this was good!! you know, i've tried to convey the same thing...except i wrote alot and you wrote a very small portion...and today, your small piece here wins. i really enjoyed it. it's so simple but it is able to make you think about complex things after.

Title article: The World We Live
Date: 2008-10-11 18:19:50

well if you hadn't noticed...i mean you must be extremely ignorant or completely stupid...but there have been poems of yours that i have liked.
and that i have left positive comments on...but these newest two i didn't like...i mean i'm not going to give you five stars like everybody else does on the site just to be nice. if i don't like it, i don't like it.
so deal with it.
you're funny though...always reading it...you know i click on the story titles without knowing who wrote them until they come up....i don't sit here all day reading solely "your" pieces. come on now...let's get real.
oh and i should have said this before.....maybe you should borrow this hater-ade of mine...it probably would have ddone this poem so much good.

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-10-11 18:13:19

well i think you definitely were more up to par with this chapter. and i like how you color code the dialogue...because it really does negate any confusion.

Title article: ICON.
Date: 2008-10-11 18:04:25

i really liked the repitition of Icon. really added to the whole story. and i also liked the line about the nun's ears closing....that was interesting to me.

Title article: The World We Live
Date: 2008-10-11 18:00:26

yea the line the other two pointed out was cool...but as for the rest. eh. it just seems, well to me, that you try too hard to rhyme and for that reason, things really come out forced.

Title article: "Please! Don't Go
Date: 2008-10-11 17:57:10

this one i didn't really care for. the rhyming was okay in some parts...but then in others, it just didn't work. and the spelling mistakes in this hung me up a couple times, which only forced me to dislike it even more.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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