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Member Since	01/23/2008
Last Online	10/07/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me, poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

I basically write about anything that seems relevant to me at the time. Most of my poetry is about me in a way. Every thought that I include in my poems is usually a thought I personally feel or have felt in the past.

I really do not write anything on the mellow or happy side. So, if you're a person who likes things to be upbeat and sugarcoated....then nothing I write is for you. And if you don't like what I write just save me the time and don't comment. Because most importantly, I don't write these poems to later see who thinks I did a good job or who thinks I fucked up. I write them for myself.

Lastly, some of my poems might even offend you because of the subjects i oppose within them. I personally feel like this country is going in the complete opposite direction of what is right...and I won't call myself an American anymore. I will not be accused for what this country does to itself. And I am surely not proud, and won't protect a flag that stands for nothing it foolishly preaches. Ending on that note, I'll leave you with a poem by one of my favorite poets, Saul Williams.

They say that I am a poet.
I wonder what they would say
If they saw me
From the inside.
I bottle emotions
And place them into the sea
For others to unbottle
On distant shores
I am unsure as to whether
They ever reach and for that matter
As to whether
I ever get my point across
Or my love

-From a true poet, Saul Williams

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Apr 1, 2008	Honeybees	Poetry	147
Mar 31, 2008	Tell Me	Poetry	170
Mar 29, 2008	Lying Awake	Poetry	153
Mar 28, 2008	Sure To Fail	Poetry	167
Mar 27, 2008	No Reply	Poetry	218
Mar 27, 2008	Normal Life	Poetry	207
Mar 27, 2008	Hard To Say	Poetry	187
Mar 27, 2008	Among The Stars	Poetry	171
Mar 27, 2008	Without A Clue	Poetry	174
Mar 26, 2008	Poetic Hideaway	Poetry	154
Mar 22, 2008	Host	Poetry	145
Mar 22, 2008	Only A Circus	Poetry	170
Mar 22, 2008	Desperate Repairs	Poetry	152
Mar 22, 2008	Stains	Poetry	168
Mar 20, 2008	Love	Poetry	173
Mar 19, 2008	Decaying Angel	Poetry	199
Mar 19, 2008	No Way Back	Poetry	191
Mar 19, 2008	Dead and Gone	Poetry	181
Mar 17, 2008	Eclipse	Poetry	207
Mar 16, 2008	Alcohol	Poetry	444

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Comments

Total number of comments: 1143

Title article: The train that forgets to stop at every station
Date: 2008-10-07 18:38:30

yea i commend you on portraying this alcohol addict. i think you did a good job jotting down his thoughts....you made them entertaining to read. and yea, i think it was easy to pick up this person was young and still in school. hopefully this is just fiction, but then again i know my fair share of drug addicts in my own school so it's not impossible for this to be true.

Title article: A Dreamy Morning
Date: 2008-10-07 18:32:14

i have the same opinion on the length as hodders....but wow, i did really like this one...at first, i thought it was going to be this feel good poem about everything beautiful and bright..but it turned out to be different than that. it was living in now..forgetting about all the aspects of life and just being.....which could be such a great thing to feel...but the ending was what i enjoyed most where you pointed out that the description is not the described. very creative and enticing.

Title article: Internet Love
Date: 2008-10-07 18:22:04

i enjoyed this read. even though it didn't have a distinct rhyme to it, i still pulled out a nice easy flow that moved along the lines. and the story it told was interesting as well....but, maybe it could have worked..if the both of you would have portrayed your true self on the web, rather than only showing some truth to the person you were or distorting it. if you distort who you are in a relationship, how do you really expect it to work??

Title article: An Affair With Darkness
Date: 2008-10-07 18:14:30

i liked this. it was a different kind of story than i expected from the title, but i enjoyed it all the same. you write extremely well and this was a pleasure to read.

Title article: Down Time
Date: 2008-10-06 18:42:28

okay...well i see.
but to be honest...i still don't care for that being the last line. i mean yea i get it now...and i know just as well what this down time means...i just didn't call it that myself when i went through it...but i still don't care for the line.
but hey, it's just my opinion.

Title article: The Photograph
Date: 2008-10-06 18:10:01

i thought it was pretty good.
i wasn't blown away by it...but it was good.
i think it held an emotion that alot of us have or will experience in our lifetime.

Title article: DIDN'T KNOW THEN.
Date: 2008-10-06 18:06:06

this was...wow, i am just blown away by this one Terry. i mean all your poems are simply magnificent, but this one really stood out to me. it held that unique flow you always manage to contain every once in a while in your poems. very good. a favorite!

Title article: Golden Night
Date: 2008-10-06 17:43:36

it is quite interesting to see what you write next...your poems are always crafted so well and have the greatest flow.
this one was very good...this has to be one of my favorites that i have read of yours so far.
i liked the feel of it.

Title article: If Only
Date: 2008-10-06 16:05:41

i thought it was a very accurate presentation of the theme covered...but i didn't like how you ended with the same words on some occasions...but overall, it was good.

Title article: Fly beyond the boundaries
Date: 2008-10-06 16:02:02

i did like this don't get me wrong...the simpleness to it was good and i easily interpreted the message...but here and there the flow seemed to stop and i found myself backing up and starting again.

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) Indiana	Created On: 09/04/2008 18:41:18 Hey, man. What's up? You got some more kickass poems up in that strange noggin of yours? Cough 'em up, I need my fix. Hurry ... I'm ... jonesing ... like ... a ... smiley face Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): yea i know....i haven't been able to write anything recently...my mind is kinda bogged down at the moment. but i am trying to put some more pieces together. right now they are all incomplete, but i'll finish them up. i keep wanting to post things but then end up deleting them because i think they're shit.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/23/2008 16:10:47 Sooooooooooooo... just stopping by to give you a friendly poke.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 07/12/2008 21:35:53 Of course we get along A couple of those last poems were from awhile ago, but yeah, I definitely have the darker side in me that I don't let come out and play that often. I've got a few more up my sleeve that I'm debating whether or not to post. I LOVE your stuff though. You have no problem just putting your emotions out there.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/09/2008 08:20:51 good news. bubble and her personalties got deleted! it will be a cold day in hell for those cruel bastards. cheers! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): really?? well that's great news. i was getting very irritated with the many annoying personalities she had.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) tied up a gagged in some bloke's basement	Created On: 07/06/2008 15:49:18 You better, or I'll have to create a second profile and bash all of your existing poems because I'm cool and not a loser. Ha! Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): haha yea i know i feel left out on the whole multiple profile thing. but i guess i'll just be lame and stay with one.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.

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