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Last Online	07/05/2008
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About Myself:

My writings began as short little stories. But then I began to experiment my writing style into the world of poems. And ever since then I haven't been able to stop writing poems. For me poems are more fun to write and they are alot more challenging.

Hope is dead.
Faith is gone.
Never rely on love.
It only ever turns out wrong.

Now tie this noose around my neck
Let me hang here by the sunset.
All of this I wish to forget.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 30, 2008	I'll Be Watching The Sunset	Poetry	121
Jun 29, 2008	Cruel and Lonely Game	Poetry	68
Jun 29, 2008	Down Here On The Ground	Poetry	64
Jun 27, 2008	Please Run Far Away	Poetry	75
Jun 26, 2008	Running In Your Veins	Poetry	133
Jun 25, 2008	To Dig Myself Out	Poetry	75
Jun 24, 2008	Not Even A Million Tears	Poetry	86
Jun 21, 2008	With Hands Folded	Poetry	88
Jun 20, 2008	Let Us Pray	Poetry	79
Jun 19, 2008	Divine Intervention	Miscellaneous Stories	81
Jun 16, 2008	A Bloodshot World	Poetry	78
Jun 13, 2008	Never Did Fit	Poetry	48
Jun 13, 2008	Flower In A Vase	Poetry	53
Jun 12, 2008	Life As It Stands	Poetry	55
Jun 9, 2008	One In The Same	Poetry	71
Jun 8, 2008	She's Only A Device	Poetry	83
Jun 6, 2008	White Coats	Poetry	71
Jun 4, 2008	I'm Closer To Nothing	Poetry	90
Jun 2, 2008	Road of Blood	Poetry	76
Jun 1, 2008	Purple Haze	Miscellaneous Stories	198

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honey (honey)

Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)

August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

Matt (midnighthowl15)

Jessye (marchintothesea)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

rosa mae alamil (topsyturvywords)

Jody (Jody)

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 06/06/2008 10:34:56 a zombie was here (keep on writing awesome poems!) Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): well i think this is the first zombie to sign my book haha. but i'll try to keep giving you good poems to read.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 05/23/2008 07:50:25 Ai Shite Imasu.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 04/23/2008 08:46:57 Your poems are probably the only poems I can tolerate. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): Haha well i guess that's a good thing, right?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/21/2008 14:28:51 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/21/2008 14:29:39 You are too kind (heh). I like your poetry, now that I've delved into it a little bit more; it's so thought-provoking; it's excellent, really! Cell... I like it because of how intricate all of the words used to describe a cell's composition are... if that makes any sense, at all (???). And your screen name (resistanceisfreedom) tells me you have idealistic views, and are in many senses a liberal... that is very cool. Many happinesses! Yo. Feedback from Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom): hmmm interesting. i never thought of cell that way. thank you for your appreciation for my poems! i'm glad you enjoy them. yes, i do have idealistic views for sure. i'm glad you can accept me for that. Much happiness right back!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/18/2008 07:37:04 CELL WAS HERE.
Anna DeVine (Sad Sara) Somewhere in the sense of time	Created On: 03/08/2008 12:54:58 Hi yer Cody, I juss realized I hadn't signed yer guestbook yet, so that's what's goin' on right now. Nice book, love what yer've done with the place. It's Sorrowful sure, but it rhymes. 'Anna
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it	Created On: 02/11/2008 12:24:20 You have a unique way of telling a poem...I envy you.

Comments

Total number of comments: 694

Title article: I'm Just Me
Date: 2008-07-04 21:38:11

i felt like it started out all right but then just went absolutely nowhere.

Title article: I'll Be Watching The Sunset
Date: 2008-07-04 01:53:56

okay, well where in my poem do i stop rhyming????
and you want to know what i can't fucking stand.....
people on this site with more than one profile commenting their own pieces. that's what i can't stand.

Title article: The Article
Date: 2008-07-03 22:16:05

well done!! that story led me down a path and then completely turned when i learned the mother actually brutally murdered her own daughter. how can someone bake pies one minute and then take another person's life the next?? i guess the insane.

Title article: A Game
Date: 2008-07-03 22:11:35

like Zombie said, you really made this seem "real"
and you definitely brought out the disgusting and bitter reality life can bring. but i was sad for the main character don't get me wrong but i feel as though she did nothing to try to better herself. she could have run away and at least could have tried to find something better, rather than to keep giving in.

Title article: ThE sToRm
Date: 2008-07-03 22:06:22

yes, well done. i liked how you took a different approach to describing a simple storm.

Title article: We Don't Know Why
Date: 2008-07-03 21:55:46

i thought this was a really great piece. you took uncertainty and evoked it in such a beautiful poem. really good.

Title article: Punishment
Date: 2008-07-03 21:51:13

powerful piece. was written extremely well and i couldn't stop reading it. i've always wondered how it must feel when you wake up one day and realize that today is your last day. i can't imagine that feeling.

Title article: Blue Room
Date: 2008-07-03 21:44:13

this was very good. you had me very entertained with this story. i liked how the institution was called Point Hope. and i was happy with the ending.

Title article: Snowflakes, Bubbles, Balloons
Date: 2008-07-03 21:34:21

it was a good hearted piece.

Title article: RISING STAR
Date: 2008-07-03 21:31:46

yea i think this was just too much and keeping the same ending as Allmine said was a bit distracting. but i did like the message of this. but i think you tried too hard to convey it.

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