Apparition of Justice

It was unseasonably warm he thought as he wiped the...

My Present

I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...
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About Myself: Supposedly my favorite thing to write about would be death, suicide, and murder, because no one seems to have the best idea of them.

I try to switch up my topics a lot, rather than talk about the same old thing in each one. But, I guess occasionally you'll find a poem similar to another.

Another thing I like to do is write in mainly first person view, usually having no names. I don't have many memorable, solid characters.

My longest story right now would be "Bang," but the rest are pretty short (excluding "Bodhisattva"), so if you'd rather not read for long, check the others out...unless you're just checking out my profile.

I hate Times New Roman font.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 1, 2008Sixty-SevenMystery 228
May 3, 2008I Can See ClearlyPoetry 173
May 3, 2008Beginning = EndingPoetry 151
Apr 18, 2008GrotesqueMiscellaneous Stories 207
Apr 18, 2008JealousyPoetry 194
Mar 13, 2008UnhealthyPoetry 208
Mar 6, 2008BodhisattvaMiscellaneous Stories 223
Mar 6, 2008No SurprisesNon-Fiction 308
Feb 5, 2008IncredibleMiscellaneous Stories 344
Jan 28, 2008Invisible SoldierMiscellaneous Stories 414
Jan 28, 2008Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the LovelyMiscellaneous Stories 358
Jan 27, 2008Story with a Meaningless TitleMiscellaneous Stories 282
Jan 27, 2008Seven Deadly SinsPoetry 682
Jan 26, 2008End of LifeHorror 371
Jan 26, 2008BangRomance 459
Jan 25, 2008Death Within a MinuteHorror 367
Jan 25, 2008Eventually We Will EscapeHorror 327
Jan 25, 2008What an Awfully Gray Sky DayMiscellaneous Stories 290
Jan 24, 2008CoexistentPoetry 286
Jan 24, 2008LifePoetry 326
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Comments

Title article: NECTAR
Date: 2008-05-09 09:01:43

Tarhead, that was a bit cheezy. But, I'd probably have to agree with him. I thought it was a delicate situation, everytime the bee would come to the bud, the bud never seemed to talk, so the bee finally asked why not, and the bud greeted the bee with everything the bee wanted. That is a true match.

Title article: FOCUS
Date: 2008-05-09 08:52:15

Hmm, so he is supposed to focus on the flowers, but he doesn't have any focus. Interesting, he has to do the thing he's lacking. A good story, I like the idea of the thorns versus flowers. How could you get any happier if what you're looking at are the thorns and not the flowers?

Title article: A True Story About a very Young and Naive Nathan Weaver
Date: 2008-05-09 07:54:44

It brought back memories to me too, but who in the hell ever gets confused about briefs? This was a good story to laugh to, it sort of made me think, why when we were younger, we thought things like that were good. What a good read.

Title article: Gone
Date: 2008-05-09 07:48:24

Love is one of the most beautiful and ugliest things...So I've heard. I was reading through it and I got to the second stanza and thought, I should mention how much I liked this. But then I reached the end, and I had too many to mention I liked, so I'm just going to say I liked everything. Great poem, your talent is extraordinary.

Title article: Laughter Is Something We All Need
Date: 2008-05-09 07:43:49

Hey, I've had this happen to me. When I was in middle school, there was a teacher just as written above, and he would never joke. One day I got him laughing and I felt as though another goal was accomplished...Then he gave me my first detention. 
 
Good story, brings back memories.

Title article: Grotesque
Date: 2008-05-08 16:59:53

Hey thanks. I haven't really heard from you in a while so I'm real glad you liked this one. Nothing bad to say? That sounds good to me.

Title article: I Can See Clearly
Date: 2008-05-07 14:54:18

Thanks for the comment, it is nice thinking there is a whole.

Title article: Beginning = Ending
Date: 2008-05-07 14:52:48

I guess it was a bit complicated to show. Practically I tried to describe an unrealistic beginning to the world. And the phrase" Buildings became too rooty" describes how companies and factories and skyscrapers spread (like roots). And "The air became entirely flirty" expresses how we became to breathe, the air started to "flirt" with organisms, bringing them to us. 
 
I hope that helps.

Title article: Life In The Family
Date: 2008-05-06 18:32:12

How eerie. A great tone was set in this. Especially when the voice was occurring. I think I might have gotten a shiver up my spine when reading that. And the unexpected "I won" attitude at the end completed it. 
 
I've had it where my dad confronted me about one of my suicide stories. Nothing too much fun to go through. But I never had the laughing conscience.

Title article: Breaking Point
Date: 2008-05-06 18:22:02

One of the most beautiful and ugliest things to experience. Love. You convey your emotions very well without overdoing it. It's a great talent.

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07/05/2008 10:53:32Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1251
07/03/2008 20:16:18Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1251
06/29/2008 16:11:21Re:Going to a better placeOff-Topic238
06/29/2008 16:05:37Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1251
06/29/2008 16:03:43Re:Who else believes?Off-Topic1209
06/29/2008 15:58:29Re:What is your inspiration?Off-Topic281
06/07/2008 15:11:04Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic35845
06/07/2008 15:07:41Re:What If?Off-Topic715
06/07/2008 14:58:25Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?Off-Topic2307
06/07/2008 14:48:44Re:If Zombies Ruled the Earth...Off-Topic308

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Germ (Guitarist986)

 Created On: 06/20/2008 19:30:10
Hey just thought I'd write on this thing I'm still trying to figure everything out about this site and I'm glad your here as my friend thanks.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No problem! Looking forward to writing with you!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/10/2008 20:56:57
Keiko *hearts* Rin.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): What a sweet signature.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/06/2008 14:09:03
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Pez! You keep filling up my guestbook! ...I can't yell at you, do what you please, but there is always revenge around the corner...
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/11/2008 13:29:12
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/22/2008 13:12:34
Yes, I noticed; thank you very much for all of your comments.

I have already read and commented on most, if not all, of your works.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/08/2008 07:31:02
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/08/2008 07:32:20
Heh... no harm done . I'm way too self-conscious sometimes .

I also very much enjoy your comments; if you've posted one on a story, it's one of the first that I read. I've yet to read most of your stories. But I will get on it soon.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Wow, it's an honor for my comments to be one of the first you read. Hey, take your time on my stories, I'm working on yours too.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/06/2008 10:29:32
Energy? hehehe. Is that the nice way of saying I'm not such a great writer nowadays? hehehe. (^-^)
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No! you always seem to have so much energy in your stories and comments...I'm going to go fix that now.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 02/06/2008 00:28:09
your poetry has an interesting style, kinda like a flotation device...
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Hey thanks, I guess that would mean they're light in a sense.
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 02/03/2008 03:26:05
*signs*
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Well you seem to be the only one to actually sign my guestbook...hehe.

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