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Member Since	01/22/2008
Last Online	09/26/2008
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About Myself:

Supposedly my favorite thing to write about would be death, suicide, and murder, because no one seems to have the best idea for them.

I try to switch up my topics a lot, rather than talk about the same old thing in each one. But, I guess occasionally you'll find a poem similar to another.

Another thing I like to do is write in mainly first person view, usually having no names. I don't have many memorable, solid characters.

My longest story right now would be "Bang," but the rest are pretty short (excluding "Bodhisattva"), so if you'd rather not read for long, check the others out...unless you're just checking out my profile.

I hate Times New Roman font.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 1, 2008	Sixty-Seven	Mystery	267
May 3, 2008	I Can See Clearly	Poetry	199
May 3, 2008	Beginning = Ending	Poetry	176
Apr 18, 2008	Grotesque	Miscellaneous Stories	238
Apr 18, 2008	Jealousy	Poetry	218
Mar 13, 2008	Unhealthy	Poetry	234
Mar 6, 2008	Bodhisattva	Miscellaneous Stories	256
Mar 6, 2008	No Surprises	Non-Fiction	339
Feb 5, 2008	Incredible	Miscellaneous Stories	376
Jan 28, 2008	Invisible Soldier	Miscellaneous Stories	437
Jan 28, 2008	Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the Lovely	Miscellaneous Stories	383
Jan 27, 2008	Story with a Meaningless Title	Miscellaneous Stories	305
Jan 27, 2008	Seven Deadly Sins	Poetry	776
Jan 26, 2008	End of Life	Horror	392
Jan 26, 2008	Bang	Romance	484
Jan 25, 2008	Death Within a Minute	Horror	391
Jan 25, 2008	Eventually We Will Escape	Horror	343
Jan 25, 2008	What an Awfully Gray Sky Day	Miscellaneous Stories	309
Jan 24, 2008	Coexistent	Poetry	303
Jan 24, 2008	Life	Poetry	338

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Comments

Title article: Death Within a Minute
Date: 2008-05-14 14:55:25

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it, I think this is one of my favorites out of mine. No need to thank me for the comments, I enjoyed reading your stories.

Title article: Eventually We Will Escape
Date: 2008-05-14 14:53:52

There's always ways to improve. Thanks for the comment.

Title article: Thoughts on Spring
Date: 2008-05-10 13:18:44

I like the arrangement, though I question why it's like that? The last line gave me a smile, and I like the metaphor to the heart thawing. Very enjoyable, where the hell have we been?

Title article: The Battle of the Bend
Date: 2008-05-10 13:10:42

I felt as though while I read it, it only got louder and louder till the end, when the last line was whispered. This was very tense to me, and the ending came just in time. It had a unique rhyme in the beginning. Very well written.

Title article: Mute whispers
Date: 2008-05-10 13:06:21

Creepy...She questioned herself on wanting to commit suicide. What a deep twist. Nice poem...or story...maybe both.

Title article: I Don't Want It Back
Date: 2008-05-10 12:59:02

I disagree. I'm sure people have felt bad for betrayal.

Your poem is sweet in a sense. Like a little puppy who did something wrong. It feels terrible to have to replace your heart, and you portrayed that emotion perfectly. Very nice poem.

Title article: Psychedelic Relic
Date: 2008-05-10 12:54:48

Ah, what good days those were...I mean no war, that's what I mean. And maybe a few weird looking shirts...

How long did it take you to make each letter a different color?!

Title article: And Ever
Date: 2008-05-10 12:47:19

It does seem forcing. At first I thought it was just a man pronouncing his love to a girl, but the last line really adds the effect. Well written for the emotion you desired.

Title article: Consumer
Date: 2008-05-10 12:42:28

The fourth stanza was my favorite. This is unique in it's meaning and verses. I enjoyed the inconvenient truth.

Title article: Super Short Scenes, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-05-10 12:30:00

Same here. This was a cute little story with nothing big blocking any emotions. Just a short and sweet story.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
07/05/2008 10:53:32	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1737
07/03/2008 20:16:18	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1737
06/29/2008 16:11:21	Re:Going to a better place	Off-Topic	311
06/29/2008 16:05:37	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1737
06/29/2008 16:03:43	Re:Who else believes?	Off-Topic	1486
06/29/2008 15:58:29	Re:What is your inspiration?	Off-Topic	387
06/07/2008 15:11:04	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	46234
06/07/2008 15:07:41	Re:What If?	Off-Topic	930
06/07/2008 14:58:25	Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?	Off-Topic	3448
06/07/2008 14:48:44	Re:If Zombies Ruled the Earth...	Off-Topic	410

Connection

Egoist (Egoist)'s connections

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Barbie Dorrough (Barbie)

Billy (Vango)

Zoya (charmed242)

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Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

b.k. (b.k.)

August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 03/10/2008 20:56:57 Keiko hearts Rin. Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): What a sweet signature.
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 03/06/2008 14:09:03 Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Pez! You keep filling up my guestbook! ...I can't yell at you, do what you please, but there is always revenge around the corner...
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 02/11/2008 13:29:12 Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/22/2008 13:12:34 Yes, I noticed; thank you very much for all of your comments. I have already read and commented on most, if not all, of your works.
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 02/08/2008 07:31:02 Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/08/2008 07:32:20 Heh... no harm done . I'm way too self-conscious sometimes . I also very much enjoy your comments; if you've posted one on a story, it's one of the first that I read. I've yet to read most of your stories. But I will get on it soon. Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Wow, it's an honor for my comments to be one of the first you read. Hey, take your time on my stories, I'm working on yours too.
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 02/06/2008 10:29:32 Energy? hehehe. Is that the nice way of saying I'm not such a great writer nowadays? hehehe. (^-^) Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No! you always seem to have so much energy in your stories and comments...I'm going to go fix that now.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country, texas	Created On: 02/06/2008 00:28:09 your poetry has an interesting style, kinda like a flotation device... Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Hey thanks, I guess that would mean they're light in a sense.
Mugen (Dirkin)	Created On: 02/03/2008 03:26:05 signs Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Well you seem to be the only one to actually sign my guestbook...hehe.