Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

There Is No Me Without You

You're all I think about, Watching you...
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About Myself: Supposedly my favorite thing to write about would be death, suicide, and murder, because no one seems to have the best idea for them.

I try to switch up my topics a lot, rather than talk about the same old thing in each one. But, I guess occasionally you'll find a poem similar to another.

Another thing I like to do is write in mainly first person view, usually having no names. I don't have many memorable, solid characters.

My longest story right now would be "Bang," but the rest are pretty short (excluding "Bodhisattva"), so if you'd rather not read for long, check the others out...unless you're just checking out my profile.

I hate Times New Roman font.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jan 22, 2008Seven Letter WordHorror 919
Jan 27, 2008Seven Deadly SinsPoetry 690
Jan 22, 2008Why Do Our Wishes Not Come True?Poetry 465
Jan 26, 2008BangRomance 462
Jan 28, 2008Invisible SoldierMiscellaneous Stories 418
Jan 22, 2008BlasphemyPoetry 387
Jan 26, 2008End of LifeHorror 378
Jan 23, 2008I Have a Tendency to Hurt Myself He SaysMiscellaneous Stories 370
Jan 25, 2008Death Within a MinuteHorror 369
Jan 28, 2008Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the LovelyMiscellaneous Stories 362
Jan 23, 2008Beauty in DeathHorror 353
Feb 5, 2008IncredibleMiscellaneous Stories 347
Jan 25, 2008Eventually We Will EscapeHorror 330
Jan 24, 2008LifePoetry 328
Jan 23, 2008Surprisingly I Woke Up AgainMiscellaneous Stories 328
Jan 22, 2008Abnormality of the Sky's New FacePoetry 325
Mar 6, 2008No SurprisesNon-Fiction 315
Jan 23, 2008Last to BleedPoetry 304
Jan 23, 2008The Day the Sun Went the Other WayPoetry 296
Jan 25, 2008What an Awfully Gray Sky DayMiscellaneous Stories 293
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Comments

Total number of comments: 269

Title article: Red Tears
Date: 2008-08-14 19:31:21

I wasn't expecting it to be the popular girl. I was heading along with the flow of the story (which was very smooth), then all of a sudden the unexpected character is revealed. I liked how you tied the story in with a painting , and how the story was told through a bland person's mind.  
 
A creative story, and my favorite part was the secretive mind that the popular girl has.

Title article: Sixty-Seven
Date: 2008-06-21 11:19:16

Try reading it backwards.

Title article: Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the Lovely
Date: 2008-06-15 17:43:56

Thank you. I remember the exact day I wrote this (of course it was raining). But what made me want to write it was the sunset which had freed itself from the clouds. To see a sunset while it's pouring is a beautiful sight. Glad you liked it.

Title article: On Word
Date: 2008-06-10 09:59:17

I can't get over how deep your poetry is Anna. You display such grace and beauty in every line. Antipersonification, is that what it would be called? I call it perfect.

Title article: Panda Jesus: Or How Jesus Got His Panda Back
Date: 2008-06-07 17:51:10

I'll be honest and say...I don't know how to comment this. 
 
At parts it was great. In the end it was like a guy with Tourette's who had never heard a curse word in his life. But because of that, it brings an interesting read that the harder you try to decifer, the louder it gets.

Title article: Chapter 5 Rocks
Date: 2008-06-07 17:42:50

I did this once. I think.  
 
I sat in front of a desk with a piece of paper and a pencil and just started to write words and I never let my mind go blank. Though the words you wrote were a lot bigger than mine.

Title article: Grotesque
Date: 2008-06-01 11:00:03

This was graded, and I got 100. Pretty proud right here. Thanks for all the comments.

Title article: Admittedly, I Have Been Busy.
Date: 2008-06-01 10:41:24

This is so interactive. It's a good comeback from the long delay. At first I got a sort of homey feeling when reading this. It is so dense in details, that it tells more than one story. These lines were like waves, they talked of one thing to only build up the next. Wow, I haven't commented like this in a while. Thanks for the read.

Title article: I Can See Clearly
Date: 2008-05-14 15:01:32

Hey, I haven't heard from you in a long time. I'm glad you liked it, I always noticed weird social standards between certain people, so I made my thoughts into a poem.

Title article: Bodhisattva
Date: 2008-05-14 14:59:55

Well I didn't expect you to read one of my longer ones so soon. Thank you, I'm glad you liked the twist in the end. I guess you could say it was based off of the Japanese culture really.

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DateSubjectCategoryHits
07/05/2008 10:53:32Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1380
07/03/2008 20:16:18Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1380
06/29/2008 16:11:21Re:Going to a better placeOff-Topic257
06/29/2008 16:05:37Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1380
06/29/2008 16:03:43Re:Who else believes?Off-Topic1335
06/29/2008 15:58:29Re:What is your inspiration?Off-Topic308
06/07/2008 15:11:04Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37066
06/07/2008 15:07:41Re:What If?Off-Topic748
06/07/2008 14:58:25Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?Off-Topic2407
06/07/2008 14:48:44Re:If Zombies Ruled the Earth...Off-Topic329

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Germ (Guitarist986)

 Created On: 06/20/2008 19:30:10
Hey just thought I'd write on this thing I'm still trying to figure everything out about this site and I'm glad your here as my friend thanks.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No problem! Looking forward to writing with you!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/10/2008 20:56:57
Keiko *hearts* Rin.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): What a sweet signature.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/06/2008 14:09:03
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Pez! You keep filling up my guestbook! ...I can't yell at you, do what you please, but there is always revenge around the corner...
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/11/2008 13:29:12
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/22/2008 13:12:34
Yes, I noticed; thank you very much for all of your comments.

I have already read and commented on most, if not all, of your works.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/08/2008 07:31:02
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/08/2008 07:32:20
Heh... no harm done . I'm way too self-conscious sometimes .

I also very much enjoy your comments; if you've posted one on a story, it's one of the first that I read. I've yet to read most of your stories. But I will get on it soon.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Wow, it's an honor for my comments to be one of the first you read. Hey, take your time on my stories, I'm working on yours too.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/06/2008 10:29:32
Energy? hehehe. Is that the nice way of saying I'm not such a great writer nowadays? hehehe. (^-^)
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No! you always seem to have so much energy in your stories and comments...I'm going to go fix that now.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 02/06/2008 00:28:09
your poetry has an interesting style, kinda like a flotation device...
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Hey thanks, I guess that would mean they're light in a sense.
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 02/03/2008 03:26:05
*signs*
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Well you seem to be the only one to actually sign my guestbook...hehe.

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