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Member Since	01/22/2008
Last Online	09/26/2008
Connections	15
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About Myself:

Supposedly my favorite thing to write about would be death, suicide, and murder, because no one seems to have the best idea for them.

I try to switch up my topics a lot, rather than talk about the same old thing in each one. But, I guess occasionally you'll find a poem similar to another.

Another thing I like to do is write in mainly first person view, usually having no names. I don't have many memorable, solid characters.

My longest story right now would be "Bang," but the rest are pretty short (excluding "Bodhisattva"), so if you'd rather not read for long, check the others out...unless you're just checking out my profile.

I hate Times New Roman font.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jun 1, 2008	Sixty-Seven	Mystery	259
May 3, 2008	I Can See Clearly	Poetry	198
May 3, 2008	Beginning = Ending	Poetry	173
Apr 18, 2008	Grotesque	Miscellaneous Stories	237
Apr 18, 2008	Jealousy	Poetry	217
Mar 13, 2008	Unhealthy	Poetry	231
Mar 6, 2008	Bodhisattva	Miscellaneous Stories	253
Mar 6, 2008	No Surprises	Non-Fiction	335
Feb 5, 2008	Incredible	Miscellaneous Stories	373
Jan 28, 2008	Invisible Soldier	Miscellaneous Stories	436
Jan 28, 2008	Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the Lovely	Miscellaneous Stories	381
Jan 27, 2008	Story with a Meaningless Title	Miscellaneous Stories	302
Jan 27, 2008	Seven Deadly Sins	Poetry	759
Jan 26, 2008	End of Life	Horror	391
Jan 26, 2008	Bang	Romance	481
Jan 25, 2008	Death Within a Minute	Horror	388
Jan 25, 2008	Eventually We Will Escape	Horror	342
Jan 25, 2008	What an Awfully Gray Sky Day	Miscellaneous Stories	307
Jan 24, 2008	Coexistent	Poetry	302
Jan 24, 2008	Life	Poetry	337

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Comments

Title article: The Last Minute
Date: 2008-05-09 09:19:05

Wow, a great thinker. I've had tons of experiences with time and its speed, so I'm always thinking, how can I make the best of my time? I really liked this and I can relate to the poem so well. When it comes to my last minute of living, I'm not sure how fast it will go, it will probably be a very dreadful time consuming minute.

Title article: self infilcted pain.
Date: 2008-05-09 09:12:19

Quite short, but powerful. I liked it, your rhyming and timing was very neat, but I can't tell if it's meant to be sad of happy, so I have a very confusing emotion going on when I read this. But I could see where it would take quite a while. Very nice.

Title article: Never
Date: 2008-05-09 09:09:12

Wow, that's pretty cool how quick you must have written this story in an AIM chat. This was a bit backwards, but because of it, it makes it unique. I enjoyed this story, but I couldn't help but think the princess was a very manly lady...Nice story though.

Title article: NECTAR
Date: 2008-05-09 09:01:43

Tarhead, that was a bit cheezy. But, I'd probably have to agree with him. I thought it was a delicate situation, everytime the bee would come to the bud, the bud never seemed to talk, so the bee finally asked why not, and the bud greeted the bee with everything the bee wanted. That is a true match.

Title article: FOCUS
Date: 2008-05-09 08:52:15

Hmm, so he is supposed to focus on the flowers, but he doesn't have any focus. Interesting, he has to do the thing he's lacking. A good story, I like the idea of the thorns versus flowers. How could you get any happier if what you're looking at are the thorns and not the flowers?

Title article: A True Story About a very Young and Naive Nathan Weaver
Date: 2008-05-09 07:54:44

It brought back memories to me too, but who in the hell ever gets confused about briefs? This was a good story to laugh to, it sort of made me think, why when we were younger, we thought things like that were good. What a good read.

Title article: Gone
Date: 2008-05-09 07:48:24

Love is one of the most beautiful and ugliest things...So I've heard. I was reading through it and I got to the second stanza and thought, I should mention how much I liked this. But then I reached the end, and I had too many to mention I liked, so I'm just going to say I liked everything. Great poem, your talent is extraordinary.

Title article: Laughter Is Something We All Need
Date: 2008-05-09 07:43:49

Hey, I've had this happen to me. When I was in middle school, there was a teacher just as written above, and he would never joke. One day I got him laughing and I felt as though another goal was accomplished...Then he gave me my first detention.

Good story, brings back memories.

Title article: Grotesque
Date: 2008-05-08 16:59:53

Hey thanks. I haven't really heard from you in a while so I'm real glad you liked this one. Nothing bad to say? That sounds good to me.

Title article: I Can See Clearly
Date: 2008-05-07 14:54:18

Thanks for the comment, it is nice thinking there is a whole.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
07/05/2008 10:53:32	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1708
07/03/2008 20:16:18	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1708
06/29/2008 16:11:21	Re:Going to a better place	Off-Topic	305
06/29/2008 16:05:37	Re:Anywhere in the World	Off-Topic	1708
06/29/2008 16:03:43	Re:Who else believes?	Off-Topic	1485
06/29/2008 15:58:29	Re:What is your inspiration?	Off-Topic	378
06/07/2008 15:11:04	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	45663
06/07/2008 15:07:41	Re:What If?	Off-Topic	909
06/07/2008 14:58:25	Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?	Off-Topic	2889
06/07/2008 14:48:44	Re:If Zombies Ruled the Earth...	Off-Topic	398

Connection

Egoist (Egoist)'s connections

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August Blackwood (June Eclipsis)

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 03/10/2008 20:56:57 Keiko hearts Rin. Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): What a sweet signature.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 03/06/2008 14:09:03 Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Pez! You keep filling up my guestbook! ...I can't yell at you, do what you please, but there is always revenge around the corner...
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 02/11/2008 13:29:12 Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/22/2008 13:12:34 Yes, I noticed; thank you very much for all of your comments. I have already read and commented on most, if not all, of your works.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 02/08/2008 07:31:02 Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/08/2008 07:32:20 Heh... no harm done . I'm way too self-conscious sometimes . I also very much enjoy your comments; if you've posted one on a story, it's one of the first that I read. I've yet to read most of your stories. But I will get on it soon. Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Wow, it's an honor for my comments to be one of the first you read. Hey, take your time on my stories, I'm working on yours too.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 02/06/2008 10:29:32 Energy? hehehe. Is that the nice way of saying I'm not such a great writer nowadays? hehehe. (^-^) Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No! you always seem to have so much energy in your stories and comments...I'm going to go fix that now.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country, texas	Created On: 02/06/2008 00:28:09 your poetry has an interesting style, kinda like a flotation device... Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Hey thanks, I guess that would mean they're light in a sense.
Mugen (Dirkin)	Created On: 02/03/2008 03:26:05 signs Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Well you seem to be the only one to actually sign my guestbook...hehe.