Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

Ebony Eyes

Her name was Carly, Carly Richardson and Ricky had...
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About Myself: Supposedly my favorite thing to write about would be death, suicide, and murder, because no one seems to have the best idea for them.

I try to switch up my topics a lot, rather than talk about the same old thing in each one. But, I guess occasionally you'll find a poem similar to another.

Another thing I like to do is write in mainly first person view, usually having no names. I don't have many memorable, solid characters.

My longest story right now would be "Bang," but the rest are pretty short (excluding "Bodhisattva"), so if you'd rather not read for long, check the others out...unless you're just checking out my profile.

I hate Times New Roman font.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 1, 2008Sixty-SevenMystery 233
May 3, 2008I Can See ClearlyPoetry 178
May 3, 2008Beginning = EndingPoetry 155
Apr 18, 2008GrotesqueMiscellaneous Stories 212
Apr 18, 2008JealousyPoetry 196
Mar 13, 2008UnhealthyPoetry 214
Mar 6, 2008BodhisattvaMiscellaneous Stories 228
Mar 6, 2008No SurprisesNon-Fiction 315
Feb 5, 2008IncredibleMiscellaneous Stories 348
Jan 28, 2008Invisible SoldierMiscellaneous Stories 418
Jan 28, 2008Endless Nights Can Only be Described Through the Eyes of the LovelyMiscellaneous Stories 362
Jan 27, 2008Story with a Meaningless TitleMiscellaneous Stories 286
Jan 27, 2008Seven Deadly SinsPoetry 690
Jan 26, 2008End of LifeHorror 378
Jan 26, 2008BangRomance 463
Jan 25, 2008Death Within a MinuteHorror 369
Jan 25, 2008Eventually We Will EscapeHorror 330
Jan 25, 2008What an Awfully Gray Sky DayMiscellaneous Stories 293
Jan 24, 2008CoexistentPoetry 289
Jan 24, 2008LifePoetry 328
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Comments

Title article: Seven Deadly Sins
Date: 2008-05-14 14:58:32

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Title article: Seven Deadly Sins
Date: 2008-05-14 14:56:28

So you noticed the colors? Thank you.

Title article: Death Within a Minute
Date: 2008-05-14 14:55:25

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it, I think this is one of my favorites out of mine. No need to thank me for the comments, I enjoyed reading your stories.

Title article: Eventually We Will Escape
Date: 2008-05-14 14:53:52

There's always ways to improve. Thanks for the comment.

Title article: Thoughts on Spring
Date: 2008-05-10 13:18:44

I like the arrangement, though I question why it's like that? The last line gave me a smile, and I like the metaphor to the heart thawing. Very enjoyable, where the hell have we been?

Title article: The Battle of the Bend
Date: 2008-05-10 13:10:42

I felt as though while I read it, it only got louder and louder till the end, when the last line was whispered. This was very tense to me, and the ending came just in time. It had a unique rhyme in the beginning. Very well written.

Title article: Mute whispers
Date: 2008-05-10 13:06:21

Creepy...She questioned herself on wanting to commit suicide. What a deep twist. Nice poem...or story...maybe both.

Title article: Insane
Date: 2008-05-10 13:02:53

I felt like commenting on this again... 
 
As I said in my last comment, "I keep reading it over and over," it only made sense to me to comment again. Who doesn't like comments?... 
 
Well that was my comment. Goodbye.

Title article: I Don't Want It Back
Date: 2008-05-10 12:59:02

I disagree. I'm sure people have felt bad for betrayal.  
 
Your poem is sweet in a sense. Like a little puppy who did something wrong. It feels terrible to have to replace your heart, and you portrayed that emotion perfectly. Very nice poem.

Title article: Psychedelic Relic
Date: 2008-05-10 12:54:48

Ah, what good days those were...I mean no war, that's what I mean. And maybe a few weird looking shirts... 
 
How long did it take you to make each letter a different color?!

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Last 10 Forum Posts
DateSubjectCategoryHits
07/05/2008 10:53:32Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1380
07/03/2008 20:16:18Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1380
06/29/2008 16:11:21Re:Going to a better placeOff-Topic257
06/29/2008 16:05:37Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic1380
06/29/2008 16:03:43Re:Who else believes?Off-Topic1338
06/29/2008 15:58:29Re:What is your inspiration?Off-Topic308
06/07/2008 15:11:04Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic37198
06/07/2008 15:07:41Re:What If?Off-Topic752
06/07/2008 14:58:25Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?Off-Topic2446
06/07/2008 14:48:44Re:If Zombies Ruled the Earth...Off-Topic336

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Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/10/2008 20:56:57
Keiko *hearts* Rin.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): What a sweet signature.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 03/06/2008 14:09:03
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Pez! You keep filling up my guestbook! ...I can't yell at you, do what you please, but there is always revenge around the corner...
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/11/2008 13:29:12
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/22/2008 13:12:34
Yes, I noticed; thank you very much for all of your comments.

I have already read and commented on most, if not all, of your works.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/08/2008 07:31:02
Edited By Yahaira Nunez (Pez) On: 02/08/2008 07:32:20
Heh... no harm done . I'm way too self-conscious sometimes .

I also very much enjoy your comments; if you've posted one on a story, it's one of the first that I read. I've yet to read most of your stories. But I will get on it soon.
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Wow, it's an honor for my comments to be one of the first you read. Hey, take your time on my stories, I'm working on yours too.
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 02/06/2008 10:29:32
Energy? hehehe. Is that the nice way of saying I'm not such a great writer nowadays? hehehe. (^-^)
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): No! you always seem to have so much energy in your stories and comments...I'm going to go fix that now.
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

hill country, texas
 Created On: 02/06/2008 00:28:09
your poetry has an interesting style, kinda like a flotation device...
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Hey thanks, I guess that would mean they're light in a sense.
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 02/03/2008 03:26:05
*signs*
Feedback from Egoist (Egoist): Well you seem to be the only one to actually sign my guestbook...hehe.

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