Population:200, Chapter 2

Another creature had joined the first at the door now....

Shattered Window

The image of the shattered stained glass is still...
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Website/Blog: www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=133749
About Myself: "I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way...."

The world is perfect with the right man holding me tight and whispering in my ear, I love and you and want to take care of you forever.....And if you believe that load of crap then you are just as fucking delusional as I am.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 22, 2008A Storiesville WeddingPoetry 323
Oct 10, 2008It's a Matter of ImportanceRomance 1285
Oct 3, 2008MiseryPoetry 345
Sep 25, 2008But Did He?Poetry 517
Sep 15, 2008May and DecemberPoetry 700
Sep 10, 2008WhoreMiscellaneous Stories 1034
Aug 22, 2008My PresentPoetry 568
Aug 13, 2008The DragonPoetry 1058
Aug 5, 2008PassionRomance 1338
Jul 8, 2008The LetterRomance 940
Jun 5, 2008What Am I?Poetry 495
Jun 2, 2008More ImportantPoetry 391
May 30, 2008The Boys in Her LifePoetry 411
May 19, 2008Number 1Poetry 483
May 19, 2008Why Do I CryPoetry 795
May 5, 2008True Love MeansPoetry 688
May 5, 20081500 DaysRomance 621
May 2, 2008The Dance of LoversRomance 623
May 1, 2008When I know that you love mePoetry 404
Apr 7, 2008I want to BelievePoetry 611
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Comments

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-22 09:22:56

Much better story..and I like how she is using the extra money to make her find herself. See guys, it does take money for us to remain our best! I am especially glad that she is going to the gym...reminds me, I need to get my ass back to the gym...

Title article: Oblivious
Date: 2008-10-22 09:18:40

We all have the zone out moments. That's when we know that it is time to stop...step back and take a break from whatever it is we are doing. I have to make sure that I do this during tax season...it's a self defense mechanism of the mind

Title article: The Masquerade
Date: 2008-10-22 09:12:30

I liked it, it is very chilling. And very approproate for this time of year. Your picture reminded me of the fortune teller on the Haunted Mansion at Disneyland...don't ask...

Title article: WHEN DREAMS COME TRUE
Date: 2008-10-22 09:02:22

It's a great story of a boy and his dog, and the underlying relationship with his dad, but I don't think that the part about the unicycle is necessarily relevant in this story, at this time. You know what I mean?

Title article: ASH WEDNESDAY.
Date: 2008-10-22 08:57:38

You have had a lot of nun stories on here lately..and I know that I need to read them all. The sadness that fills their hearts, it's so deep. I want them to find joy in something

Title article: I Watched the World Die to Winter
Date: 2008-10-22 08:53:13

Interesting...I like how you compared real autumn to the autumn of our life. Don't force the rhyme, it makes it sound stilted. Go for flow over rhyme

Title article: To Spinsterhood
Date: 2008-10-22 08:50:47

First off, make the font easier to read. My eyes can't take it. It is very poetic in nature, did you mean for it to be a loose poem? But I had no idea what you were trying to say. I mean I get the general gist, but...and maybe it's the font...I dunno...

Title article: A Confused Heart
Date: 2008-10-22 08:48:43

Eh...does he love her or not? Does he treat her like crap or does he just ignore her? I am trying to get what emotion I should feel out of this poem. Good flow, but I think the first stanza last line you want to be "never" and not "ever"

Title article: How Was Your Weekend?
Date: 2008-10-22 08:38:44

This was really cute. I loved how what started out as a get crap done day turned into a f^&k it all weekend. It always seems to work that way doesn't it? I almost spewed when you talked about Buckcherry...cause I am of the opinion that Crazy Bi%^h was written just for me...

Title article: The Cheat
Date: 2008-10-22 08:17:50

Oooh Jessica I like this. It's very dark and very twisted and it brings out our inner beast. I know what you are trying to say. Why is it that there is always another girl? Seriously....great job

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Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 11/08/2008 03:01:59
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW - where are the awesome pictures dad told me about?
Feedback from Michelle Huff (allmine): Gone I only had them up for a week
J. Dane Tyler (DarcKnyt)

Here!
 Created On: 10/17/2008 11:49:36
Hey! This is just a little forget-me-not.

I've been so glad we've gotten to know each other here on Storiesville, and I can't wait for more of your amazing work.

Have a great weekend.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 10/12/2008 14:51:27
why thank you for the comment on my lemony picture lol

I figured it was about time you all knew what i REALLY looked like

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 03:45:39
Thought I should say Hi seeing as you seem to rule the roost.

r.e.potter (r.e.potter)

not sure where im at
 Created On: 09/29/2008 16:32:45
Just thought I'd pop in and say hey....so hey.

Helen Moore (HelentheCelt)

Far Far Away
 Created On: 09/10/2008 09:07:36
Hello fellow writer...

love your work

keep in touch

love and hugs xxx

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 09/03/2008 06:52:38
Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama.

Phil
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

a wasteland
 Created On: 07/03/2008 21:16:54
A zombie wishes you a happy birthday!

Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 05/02/2008 06:14:08
I had an idea! guestbook tag! guess what? You're it!
Christian Wright (The 13th)

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 Created On: 04/18/2008 00:28:59
I know who you are
Great stories, and your poems are great.

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