Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise

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There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5

THE BEGINNING The year of reflecting...
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May 30, 2008The Boys in Her LifePoetry 327
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Title article: Growing Up?
Date: 2008-08-27 09:38:50

The water will freeze, the alcohol will not. But since there is more water in beer....it will create an exploding mess in your freezer. I think it is great when parents and their children actually understand each other. I think it is fabulous that you have such a great relationship with your parents...

Title article: FIRST SEX.
Date: 2008-08-27 09:32:48

As always excellently written. I like the last couple lines about their childhood being gone. Isn't that the truth. Not pornographic, just well written..

Title article: I Am
Date: 2008-08-26 15:49:34

Hahahaha..from the minds of cats. Didn't you know that they rule the world? I loved this it was awesome...gripping by nature. I loved the calculation and stalking at the beginning of the story. Awesome job

Title article: The Chelsea Apartment
Date: 2008-08-26 15:46:09

Yes but you can't judge her or her behavior until you are in her shoes. A lot of description at the beginning of this story...needs just a little bit more towards the end....but not bad at all

Title article: Ode to Chaabuk
Date: 2008-08-26 15:37:03

If you can make nonsense work, I say go for it. Me, I don't quite have that knack! Glad that you do...though I wouldn't recommend it for all time writing!!

Title article: The Domesticate
Date: 2008-08-26 15:29:25

Not my cup of tea, but very well written. Maybe you should lengthen it an make it two separate chapters. I feel like the end was rushed. You went into such detail in the beginning

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 8
Date: 2008-08-26 12:50:32

Cool writing. I thought maybe for a second that she was being raped by her step father. That would have been twisted. But this is getting really really really good!!!

Title article: There Is Only One Star, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-08-26 08:57:03

wow...what a unique ending. Very different in the perception of reality and afterlife. Amazing. Makes you think a little bit about your existence doesn't it.

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-08-26 08:44:32

Oh a sudden shift...I love it. I wondered why Kristie would be so excited to see someone who claimed to be her dad, but now I am starting to understand. Crap, now I have to wait for you to write more....

Title article: Jericho, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-08-26 08:39:19

Pink ski masks...hahahahaha. And the headline the next day, that's hysterical. I so can't wait for the next chapter. Glad I waited a couple of days to read this, now I can go read the next one quickly

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