There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4

MEET KHWAHN Somewhere around six...

My Present

I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...
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Title article: Red Tears
Date: 2008-08-14 15:06:48

Good job...very good job. There are some spelling errors and some grammer stuff, but mostly just typos (which I have too!) Very good characterization. I look forward to more of your writing

Title article: Peanut Butter and Doom
Date: 2008-08-14 14:27:47

I am so hysterical right now...you're stuff always makes me laugh. I lvoe a sense of humor like yours. I like how the pace of the story got faster as he got hungrier and more desparate to not "kill" the peanut butter...try eating natural pb

Title article: The Dragon
Date: 2008-08-14 13:16:10

Boy Mr Potter...that was kick ass alliteration....

Title article: House Detective
Date: 2008-08-14 12:19:31

Hell I remember this one too, cause I remmebr commenting that Marge reminded me of Mrs Cravitz from bewitched. I am glad you came back to the land of the story telling crazy people....can't wait for new stuff!

Title article: There Is Only One Star, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-08-14 12:09:01

Yeah looking forward to more. I don't think I will still be around in 2513, so you'd better write faster! Otherwise I won't know the answer and that'll bug the crap out of me!

Title article: There Is Only One Star, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-08-14 12:05:15

Okay my original thought was wrong, but I am capticated. This story definitely has American Indian overtones to it. The spritual ideas about awareness of nature and ones self. I am looking forward to the next...

Title article: There Is Only One Star, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-14 11:57:30

You know that I gotta read more before making any assumptions, but I have a thought which is slightly contradicted by other things said in this story...so onward I read...

Title article: Butterflys Are Beautiful
Date: 2008-08-14 11:52:05

Great story as always. You have a scientific twist in your brain. I love how you descirbe eveything thorougly without being over the top about it. Always with the kink at the end...

Title article: The Mexican Lasagna Incident
Date: 2008-08-14 11:29:46

This is hysterical cause my living room looks like Fisher Price took over right now! hahaha...that and the bathroom always has someone in it, always. Either that or no toilet paper. Rule number one when you have a migraine....figure out what you want! Trust me on this...

Title article: All Liquid Diet
Date: 2008-08-14 11:27:05

Sad how American girls are programmed to think that they are fat...even when they are not. I have found the older I get, the more guys appreciate my curviness. Dieting sucks...oh was that out loud? Great Story

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