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Member Since	01/22/2008
Last Online	10/07/2008
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Website/Blog:	www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=133749
About Myself:	"I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way...." The world is perfect with the right man holding me tight and whispering in my ear, I love and you and want to take care of you forever.....And if you believe that load of crap then you are just as fucking delusional as I am. I have a poem in a contest. Please click on the link above and leave a comment. Thanks...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 3, 2008	Misery	Poetry	150
Sep 25, 2008	But Did He?	Poetry	326
Sep 15, 2008	May and December	Poetry	570
Sep 10, 2008	Whore	Miscellaneous Stories	852
Aug 22, 2008	My Present	Poetry	486
Aug 13, 2008	The Dragon	Poetry	957
Aug 5, 2008	Passion	Romance	1230
Jul 8, 2008	The Letter	Romance	874
Jun 5, 2008	What Am I?	Poetry	446
Jun 2, 2008	More Important	Poetry	347
May 30, 2008	The Boys in Her Life	Poetry	367
May 19, 2008	Number 1	Poetry	433
May 19, 2008	Why Do I Cry	Poetry	701
May 5, 2008	True Love Means	Poetry	555
May 5, 2008	1500 Days	Romance	558
May 2, 2008	The Dance of Lovers	Romance	564
May 1, 2008	When I know that you love me	Poetry	346
Apr 7, 2008	I want to Believe	Poetry	530
Mar 31, 2008	You Won't Talk to Me	Poetry	398
Mar 19, 2008	The Perfect Girlfriend	Romance	1107

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Comments

Title article: Mr. Mom To The Rescue.
Date: 2008-10-06 08:10:40

Damn straight, now you know what we women do everyday of our lives, while working 8+ hours and all with a smile on our face. So don't ever forget it....

Cute story, but yes, expand on it. I was left wanting to read more, and that very rarely happens!

Title article: Fly beyond the boundaries
Date: 2008-10-06 08:02:48

Decent poem, but I felt the prose of this more than I felt the poetry of it. More like a stream of consciousness. Anyway, it was good. Keep writing

Title article: If Only
Date: 2008-10-06 08:00:48

Nice, good flow. I might think about shortening the sentences, but maybe not. I don't know...anywho. I like the theme of this poem and I do like the words you have used. Maybe eliminate the word coz. First off, it isn't a word and second off, in poetry it isn't normally needed

Title article: The Lottery
Date: 2008-10-05 07:49:11

Cure, but I was lost too. I thought Jack had the money and Neal wanted the revenge...or was oit vice versa...I dunno! Watch your capitalization, not a major del, but I have to point it out!

Title article: Misery
Date: 2008-10-05 07:36:46

If you make a song out of it, you have to send me a copy....

Speaking of Metallica.....

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-10-03 14:37:13

When I first saw it was your story, I grabbed the box of Kleenex. But it wasn't needed. You have given great descriptions of the cold and I feel how miserable he is. Can't wait for part 2!

Title article: Sexy Angel
Date: 2008-10-03 14:34:01

Women have a groin area....yeah, call me silly, but I don't see much of the point of this either. I mean I understand that you are fdescribing this woman's loveliness, but? Then what...

Title article: Paragon of Justice
Date: 2008-10-03 12:28:35

Really awesome. I loved the duality of this poem. How the one girl claims to be all innocent and good but is really not, and how on the flip side, she seems to be bad, but is trying to rectify her life. awesome!

Title article: Fall
Date: 2008-10-03 09:31:29

Wow, this is really good. At first I thought he was on a mountain, but then I realized that he was free falling. Can you imagine having to live your life like that, not ever being able to relax? Anywho, I found this thoroughly entertaining..and for the record Dylan is an awesome name (it's my son's name!)

Title article: EVEN AS A CHILD.
Date: 2008-10-03 09:19:34

Ahh, the horrors....the boogey man is what we make of him. Nice poem about the whatever word I am looking for here that some of us expeirence more than others.

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Lisa (antheerr)	Created On: 10/06/2008 03:45:39 Thought I should say Hi seeing as you seem to rule the roost.
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) not sure where im at	Created On: 09/29/2008 16:32:45 Just thought I'd pop in and say hey....so hey.
Helen Moore (HelentheCelt) Far Far Away	Created On: 09/10/2008 09:07:36 Hello fellow writer... love your work keep in touch love and hugs xxx
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire	Created On: 09/03/2008 06:52:38 Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama. Phil
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