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Songs From A Fender Bender

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Website/Blog: www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=133749
About Myself: "I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way...."

The world is perfect with the right man holding me tight and whispering in my ear, I love and you and want to take care of you forever.....And if you believe that load of crap then you are just as fucking delusional as I am.

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Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 10, 2008It's a Matter of ImportanceRomance 507
Oct 3, 2008MiseryPoetry 247
Sep 25, 2008But Did He?Poetry 422
Sep 15, 2008May and DecemberPoetry 643
Sep 10, 2008WhoreMiscellaneous Stories 924
Aug 22, 2008My PresentPoetry 508
Aug 13, 2008The DragonPoetry 974
Aug 5, 2008PassionRomance 1257
Jul 8, 2008The LetterRomance 889
Jun 5, 2008What Am I?Poetry 454
Jun 2, 2008More ImportantPoetry 353
May 30, 2008The Boys in Her LifePoetry 374
May 19, 2008Number 1Poetry 437
May 19, 2008Why Do I CryPoetry 713
May 5, 2008True Love MeansPoetry 582
May 5, 20081500 DaysRomance 566
May 2, 2008The Dance of LoversRomance 572
May 1, 2008When I know that you love mePoetry 351
Apr 7, 2008I want to BelievePoetry 542
Mar 31, 2008You Won't Talk to MePoetry 404
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Comments

Title article: One Day
Date: 2008-10-13 16:27:23

The words are beautiful in this one. I love the way that your long lones flow. That's hard to do in poetry. I love the line tomorrow will never be today...fabulous

Title article: Only Moments and Hours
Date: 2008-10-13 14:44:04

This is good. Some of the flow was a little off for me, but it isn't bad at all. I lvoe the first stanza how you describe the way the days flow on without him, colorless...etc etc....

Title article: Dyslexia
Date: 2008-10-13 13:28:10

Yeah who and what is normal? Am I normal? I hardly doubt it. The fact is we are all unique. I loved the rage you captured with your words. Brings home the point that just because he has difficulting spelling doesn't mean he is any less of a human being...or has any less of a brilliant mind...

Title article: Prologue IV - Saphadriel
Date: 2008-10-13 09:13:59

I didn't like this one as much as I like Kin's story. I dunno, I think we should know what he does without necessarily needing the technical aspect. If that makes any sense. We also need to feel more how he has become a recluse.....

Title article: Prologue I - Kin
Date: 2008-10-13 09:03:54

It is a good start. To what, we'll have to find out. For some reason, and I may be totally wrong, I get the feeling of vampirism. The club that they belong, the beautiful young people, the noise, the way he views light...maybe I am crazy (don't answer that!) but that's what I see...am I right?

Title article: A Simple Misunderstanding
Date: 2008-10-13 08:57:57

I tried to comment on this yesterday but the server wouldn't let me log on....this is a great story, but I think where she runs away from him and he takes off after her is a bit un-needed. She simply would have had to bat her eyelashes and give him a come hither look....he would have followed her like a puppy dog...

Title article: Secret British Body Shop
Date: 2008-10-13 08:46:43

There's no reason to change the title. It's sad what society does to young women (or old women for that matter), making us believe that we will never be perfect. For the record, I look like Barbie, just Barbie with a spare tire..and brown hair, and dull eyes, and....well maybe I don't look like her...hahahaha. Great twisted dark poem

Title article: When I Think of You
Date: 2008-10-13 08:43:31

Nice sick twisted poem. I loved it. Why is it men can't be honest from the get-go. It would make life a lot easier. By the way, the peas are on their way....

Title article: VESPERS 1967.
Date: 2008-10-13 08:39:25

Yeah very choppy memories. But I think this nun has feelings other than her love for Christ, am I right? I love how she is looking back on her life, or so it seems.

Title article: moneyed faces
Date: 2008-10-13 08:33:47

Like Potter, I loved the rhythm, but I have not a clue what you are trying to say. OMG, I just agreed with Potter? Am I feeling okay? I get the feeling that they are speaking of battle? Am I right?

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Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 10/12/2008 14:51:27
why thank you for the comment on my lemony picture lol

I figured it was about time you all knew what i REALLY looked like

Lisa (antheerr)

 Created On: 10/06/2008 03:45:39
Thought I should say Hi seeing as you seem to rule the roost.

r.e.potter (r.e.potter)

not sure where im at
 Created On: 09/29/2008 16:32:45
Just thought I'd pop in and say hey....so hey.

Helen Moore (HelentheCelt)

Far Far Away
 Created On: 09/10/2008 09:07:36
Hello fellow writer...

love your work

keep in touch

love and hugs xxx

Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 09/03/2008 06:52:38
Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama.

Phil
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A zombie wishes you a happy birthday!

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I had an idea! guestbook tag! guess what? You're it!
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 Created On: 04/18/2008 00:28:59
I know who you are
Great stories, and your poems are great.

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