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TO WHOM IT MIGHT CONCERN (Gambia Oct '08)

It is not all fun being invisible, not all about...

She's not very attractive. No, that isn't quite...

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Member Since	01/22/2008
Last Online	10/10/2008
Connections	33
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Website/Blog:	www.voicesnet.org/displayonepoem.aspx?poemid=133749
About Myself:	"I'm not bad, I'm just drawn that way...." The world is perfect with the right man holding me tight and whispering in my ear, I love and you and want to take care of you forever.....And if you believe that load of crap then you are just as fucking delusional as I am. I have a poem in a contest. Please click on the link above and leave a comment. Thanks...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 10, 2008	It's a Matter of Importance	Romance	63
Oct 3, 2008	Misery	Poetry	215
Sep 25, 2008	But Did He?	Poetry	386
Sep 15, 2008	May and December	Poetry	601
Sep 10, 2008	Whore	Miscellaneous Stories	896
Aug 22, 2008	My Present	Poetry	492
Aug 13, 2008	The Dragon	Poetry	965
Aug 5, 2008	Passion	Romance	1244
Jul 8, 2008	The Letter	Romance	883
Jun 5, 2008	What Am I?	Poetry	452
Jun 2, 2008	More Important	Poetry	350
May 30, 2008	The Boys in Her Life	Poetry	370
May 19, 2008	Number 1	Poetry	436
May 19, 2008	Why Do I Cry	Poetry	708
May 5, 2008	True Love Means	Poetry	565
May 5, 2008	1500 Days	Romance	560
May 2, 2008	The Dance of Lovers	Romance	566
May 1, 2008	When I know that you love me	Poetry	349
Apr 7, 2008	I want to Believe	Poetry	534
Mar 31, 2008	You Won't Talk to Me	Poetry	401

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Comments

Total number of comments: 481

Title article: Songs From A Fender Bender
Date: 2008-10-10 15:17:20

Yeah I'll say it again, his music is fantastic, you have got to check it out. It is so from the soul, and it cannot be expressed in words...so heart-touching

Title article: Neither Borrow nor Lender Be
Date: 2008-10-10 13:02:13

Ah for the love of your child....there is nothing more precious. Without the cigarette, you could have been describing me! I am on the no carb thing myself, I would die for some chocolate cake...

Title article: Have Conscience
Date: 2008-10-10 08:05:19

Interesting twist on the mind of a rapist. Problem is it's not their conscious, it's the fact that their reality is distorted. But this is a sick poem (sick being good in this case) and you got the scene so to speak right....

Title article: May
Date: 2008-10-10 08:03:16

It's simplistic and I love that. I also like the message you are portraying. You are mad and you have his guts, but you don't want him gone either. Sweet, and so very true about many relationships. Keep writing, if nothing else, it will improve your English!

Title article: Feast Of Worms, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-10-10 08:01:30

I totally agree with Max, this is such an awesome premise, you can't end it here. I wanna know what happens, where these people came from, how they are stopped, etc etc etc. I feel cheated with you ending it here. Not to mention, what am I going to do to curb my appetite next week? Hahahaha...j/k.

Title article: Cheese / Plato / Cat / Coffee / Pizza / Hanky
Date: 2008-10-10 07:57:02

I take it that this was some sort of assignment? That you had to find a way to stick these random 5 things in a story? It was pretty good, I loved the part where he talked about the connections that this girls felt the need to have. I have thought that myself. Do you really have 378 friends? Hahahaha...keep writing, your stuff is enjoyable

Title article: So I Retaliated with Song
Date: 2008-10-09 20:45:15

I love it. The words at the beginning are so sweet and poignant. To have the love and their last kiss, breathtakings. And then the ending line..hahaha. Sock it to ya. Great great poem, or song or whatever!

Title article: Connection
Date: 2008-10-09 13:01:59

You have a wonderful gift for description. And a keen eye for humanity. I loved this one, how he thought that she was crying out to him for help. I loved how they ran away together to be together. And how he came out of his dreams to not follow up on what he thought was there....

Title article: Teddy
Date: 2008-10-09 12:55:46

Brilliant story Max. It's such a shame that these monstrosities happen to children and I love how you told it from the inatimate bear's point of view. I hope this poor girl finds her savior soon

Title article: Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-10-09 11:11:01

Not my favorite of all the chapters. Besides it hurt my heart when the blonde is getting the satisfaction from her work. It's like no matter what she did for the guy, she ain't getting nothing out of it

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Name	Entry
Lisa (antheerr)	Created On: 10/06/2008 03:45:39 Thought I should say Hi seeing as you seem to rule the roost.
r.e.potter (r.e.potter) not sure where im at	Created On: 09/29/2008 16:32:45 Just thought I'd pop in and say hey....so hey.
Helen Moore (HelentheCelt) Far Far Away	Created On: 09/10/2008 09:07:36 Hello fellow writer... love your work keep in touch love and hugs xxx
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire	Created On: 09/03/2008 06:52:38 Birthday? Nobody told me.......errr Happy Birthday mama. Phil
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) a wasteland	Created On: 07/03/2008 21:16:54 A zombie wishes you a happy birthday!
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Christian Wright (The 13th) wicklow	Created On: 04/18/2008 00:28:59 I know who you are Great stories, and your poems are great.
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