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Marshall (Blackxink)
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Website/Blog: www.Allpoetry.com/Blackxink
About Myself: I am a fourteen year old writer who is in love with literature in all of its aspects. I enjoy all sorts of things, such as: poetry, short stories, music, movies, and good, stimulating conversations.

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Total number of comments: 3

Title article: Confining darkness
Date: 2008-05-06 11:03:56
This is amasing
This is a wonderful piece of writing and i can tell just by looking at it that you put alot of thought and time into it. But, and this my only critisism, there are a few words that either need to be taken out or added in. There are also a few punctuation mistakes here and there. So you may want to consider revising. All up to you; keep it up, i would love to read more. 
 
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Title article: Nothing Else Matters
Date: 2008-04-16 11:25:08
Beautiful, a smile for the soul
This is so well written in the sense that i'm now in aww,( if that's correctly spelled). The poetry behind your words, it's absolutely mesmerizing. I find it hard to put adjectives that measure up to its magnificence in place of how i feel. You've done such a great job in writing this, keep up the great work.

Title article: Seven Letter Word
Date: 2008-01-27 13:59:51
great...but...
I think this is a great story. it kept me on the edge of my seat, even though it was only for a minute or so. The way you portray the imagery in this is wonderful; absolutely insiring. my only criticism is: i think you should let us know what happens to your main character, and tell us if the parents, plus the sister, proceed through the baracaded door. those are only suggestions of course, i would never tell you how to write your own stories. keep writing, you're great.

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