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Member Since	01/08/2008
Last Online	08/18/2008
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Website/Blog:

www.lorislittlesecret.com

About Myself:

I am a married with two kids. I am a nationally recognized Texas certified dance teacher who is a nationally certified Texas registered Pharm Tech who works full time as a bookkeeper in a real estate office and runs a part time sex toy business. How's that for diversity?

Took creative writing online a couple of semesters ago and found that I have more of a knack for story telling than I thought. Please read whatever I put on here and give me some feedback as to what you think! Positive or negative....

Been feeling kind of blah lately so I am not as active on here as I once was. Don't worry, I'll find my mojo again!

If you need help with your spelling and/or grammer, message me and I will help you out! I don't mind at all...I actually like doing that!

Only click on the above link if you are 18 or older. Sorry, it's the law! But if you are over 18, check it out...I made changes!!

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Mar 10, 2008	Brown Goo	Humor	907
Jan 15, 2008	Loneliness	Miscellaneous Stories	798
Jan 9, 2008	Never Again	Miscellaneous Stories	578
Mar 28, 2008	The Power	Miscellaneous Stories	419
Apr 14, 2008	The Revolutionary Night - Writing Prompt	Miscellaneous Stories	381
Mar 3, 2008	Topic 2 - 3/3/08	Miscellaneous Stories	260

Comments

Total number of comments: 419

Title article: Days of End (a journey of man)chapter 1 & 2
Date: 2008-06-23 08:01:03

YEAH!!!
It's back on here!!! I loved this story before and it is so much better this time. I felt as if I understood better or something. Hooray hooray!!! Can't wait for chapter 3....

Title article: The locked door/ intro
Date: 2008-05-23 08:34:19

Okay..you caught me..what's next?

Title article: Help You Sleep at Night
Date: 2008-05-23 07:10:21

Let me clarify
My previous comment. The poem was good. It was my comment about the poem that I found lame. The poem was not lame in any way shape or form. Great job as usual...your writing style is fantastic

Title article: Bleeding Out the Past
Date: 2008-05-21 09:46:29

This was fabulous

Title article: I am my Crucifix
Date: 2008-05-21 09:45:29

You have a lot of insight

Title article: Civil War
Date: 2008-05-21 09:44:27

Interesting story and very well told. I like it. Funny how all Americans can do is complain about our country, yet people are still fighting to get here. Makes you thinks....

Title article: The New Jordans
Date: 2008-05-21 09:42:06

Yeah cause I may be dumb, but I am not sure that I get it....

Title article: Help You Sleep at Night
Date: 2008-05-21 09:40:24

This is lame..but good poem

Title article: Heroes
Date: 2008-05-21 09:39:18

Rhyming in poems is hard, but you did a decent job here

Title article: 50 yrs and still waiting (ch.1)
Date: 2008-05-21 09:35:51

I agree with the above comment...you have a great gift for ideas, but you're not getting them across very clearly. Like I said in the other stories..grammer is an issue. Yes I am somewhat of a grammer nazi, so shoot me. You might want to get some opinions on your writing before publishing it....

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07/02/2008 09:25:54	Re:Suggestion	Off-Topic	7253
07/02/2008 08:40:17	Re:Suggestion	Off-Topic	7253
06/26/2008 09:58:16	Re:What Happened to Storiesville?	Off-Topic	6120
06/24/2008 07:51:59	Re:What Happened to Storiesville?	Off-Topic	6120
06/23/2008 14:55:37	Re:What Happened to Storiesville?	Off-Topic	6120
06/17/2008 08:47:15	Re:What Happened to Storiesville?	Off-Topic	6120
06/17/2008 08:22:52	Re:What Happened to Storiesville?	Off-Topic	6120
06/02/2008 08:27:17	Re:Comments: Tragedy and Good Intentions	Off-Topic	1360
05/27/2008 09:02:48	Re:whoa!!!	Off-Topic	1457
05/23/2008 08:30:09	Re:Saddened	Off-Topic	2502

Connection

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Philip Neale (philneale1952) Derbyshire, England	Created On: 07/20/2008 13:02:15 Naughty me................never signed in. Here it is! Phil
Mugen (Dirkin)	Created On: 05/03/2008 18:11:11 Tag! Now you're it!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it crownville	Created On: 05/01/2008 03:56:45 Something is missing from that pic of yours...oh I know what it is.......the crown...
Christian Wright (The 13th) Hotville	Created On: 04/23/2008 13:29:40 How you doin. Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Just fine and yourself?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 04/23/2008 11:46:59 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 04/23/2008 11:47:23 head turns into a wolf's, and whistles!!! AAAoooooogggaaaaa!!!! ref: pic. Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Thanks...
Mugen (Dirkin)	Created On: 04/17/2008 03:12:32 Hello!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Hello to you too!!!
Christian Wright (The 13th) Moodyville	Created On: 04/06/2008 03:40:02 Edited By Christian wright (thirteen) On: 04/06/2008 05:07:06 Me... moody... only when I have'nt got that damned crown.Great stories you have and thanks for your help to mine.thanks
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) right next door	Created On: 04/03/2008 01:16:53 what do you mean, i never signed your guest book! see! just occurred to me that i've been reading your work for some time now and never stopped in to tell you what a great writer you are... write on! Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Thank you David....I mean Tarhead!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it	Created On: 02/04/2008 07:00:20 Edited By R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) On: 02/12/2008 14:07:30