Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) Profile Page
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)
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Member Since 01/08/2008
Last Online 09/18/2008
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Website/Blog: www.lorislittlesecret.com
About Myself: I am a married with two kids. I am a nationally recognized Texas certified dance teacher who is a nationally certified Texas registered Pharm Tech who works full time as a bookkeeper in a real estate office and runs a part time sex toy business. How's that for diversity?

Took creative writing online a couple of semesters ago and found that I have more of a knack for story telling than I thought. Please read whatever I put on here and give me some feedback as to what you think! Positive or negative....

Been feeling kind of blah lately so I am not as active on here as I once was. Don't worry, I'll find my mojo again!

If you need help with your spelling and/or grammer, message me and I will help you out! I don't mind at all...I actually like doing that!

Only click on the above link if you are 18 or older. Sorry, it's the law! But if you are over 18, check it out...I made changes!!

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 14, 2008The Revolutionary Night - Writing PromptMiscellaneous Stories 412
Mar 28, 2008The PowerMiscellaneous Stories 435
Mar 10, 2008Brown GooHumor 927
Mar 3, 2008Topic 2 - 3/3/08Miscellaneous Stories 276
Jan 15, 2008LonelinessMiscellaneous Stories 850
Jan 9, 2008Never AgainMiscellaneous Stories 612

Comments

Title article: Gabe&Dianne ch.3 & 4
Date: 2008-05-21 09:33:21

More grammer.... 
 
I wanna know who the hell Dianna is?

Title article: Gabe & Dianne (ch.2)
Date: 2008-05-21 09:29:11

GRAMMER GRAMMER GRAMMER...it's very confusing

Title article: Gabe & Dianne (chapter 1)
Date: 2008-05-21 09:26:16

Grammer and spelling. I won't make any comment about the things that were said, after all there is some reason that you put them in there, but for me it is unclear who said what where....

Title article: The Revolutionary Night - Writing Prompt
Date: 2008-05-19 05:29:02

Yeah I know..but it was part of a writing prompt and I had no ideas. I know that it sucked and I take no offense...

Title article: Pretty-Ugly.
Date: 2008-05-13 11:54:01

I like this poem..it's really good...

Title article: Nutty Abbot
Date: 2008-05-06 09:35:56

This is very cute...

Title article: The Troubles of A God
Date: 2008-05-02 14:41:58

Interesting story..I liked it

Title article: Smoke, Steel, and Innuendo
Date: 2008-05-01 14:33:41

So many people commented on this story that I felt the need to read it. Very interesting. Couple of parts (and don't ask me which ones right now, my brain is mush) could have been just a little different in order to keep up the womanly presence. Right now, they're a little awkward. 
 
But good story....

Title article: The Jig Is Up (A Pirate's Life)
Date: 2008-05-01 06:38:35

I love pirates....anyway, I would like to know how it fits in with the song


It may be personal but it is very good...

Forum


Last 10 Forum Posts
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07/02/2008 09:25:54Re:SuggestionOff-Topic9271
07/02/2008 08:40:17Re:SuggestionOff-Topic9271
06/26/2008 09:58:16Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/24/2008 07:51:59Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/23/2008 14:55:37Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/17/2008 08:47:15Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/17/2008 08:22:52Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/02/2008 08:27:17Re:Comments: Tragedy and Good IntentionsOff-Topic1521
05/27/2008 09:02:48Re:whoa!!!Off-Topic1582
05/23/2008 08:30:09Re:SaddenedOff-Topic2715

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Name Entry
Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
Created On: 07/20/2008 13:02:15

Naughty me................never signed in.


Here it is!

Phil

Mugen (Dirkin)

Created On: 05/03/2008 18:11:11

Tag! Now you're it!

R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
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crownville
Created On: 05/01/2008 03:56:45

Something is missing from that pic of yours...oh I know what it is.......the crown...

Christian Wright (The 13th)

Hotville
Created On: 04/23/2008 13:29:40

How you doin.
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Just fine and yourself?

Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

Created On: 04/23/2008 11:46:59
Edited By Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^) On: 09/09/2008 08:38:26



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Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Thanks...

Mugen (Dirkin)

Created On: 04/17/2008 03:12:32

Hello!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Hello to you too!!!

Christian Wright (The 13th)

Moodyville
Created On: 04/06/2008 03:40:02
Edited By Christian wright (thirteen) On: 04/06/2008 05:07:06


Me... moody... only when I have'nt got that damned crown.Great stories you have and thanks for your help to mine.thanks

David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

right next door
Created On: 04/03/2008 01:16:53

what do you mean, i never signed your guest book!

see!

just occurred to me that i've been reading your work for some time now and never stopped in to tell you what a great writer you are...

write on!
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Thank you David....I mean Tarhead!

R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
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Created On: 02/04/2008 07:00:20
Edited By R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) On: 02/12/2008 14:07:30




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