The Cosmonaut Avenger

Omar trudged through a purplish gold galaxy, slapping...

Love Crawls Down the Drain

I can't believe she broke up with me! After five years...
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret) Profile Page
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)
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Member Since 01/08/2008
Last Online 09/18/2008
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Website/Blog: www.lorislittlesecret.com
About Myself: I am a married with two kids. I am a nationally recognized Texas certified dance teacher who is a nationally certified Texas registered Pharm Tech who works full time as a bookkeeper in a real estate office and runs a part time sex toy business. How's that for diversity?

Took creative writing online a couple of semesters ago and found that I have more of a knack for story telling than I thought. Please read whatever I put on here and give me some feedback as to what you think! Positive or negative....

Been feeling kind of blah lately so I am not as active on here as I once was. Don't worry, I'll find my mojo again!

If you need help with your spelling and/or grammer, message me and I will help you out! I don't mind at all...I actually like doing that!

Only click on the above link if you are 18 or older. Sorry, it's the law! But if you are over 18, check it out...I made changes!!

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 14, 2008The Revolutionary Night - Writing PromptMiscellaneous Stories 412
Mar 28, 2008The PowerMiscellaneous Stories 435
Mar 10, 2008Brown GooHumor 927
Mar 3, 2008Topic 2 - 3/3/08Miscellaneous Stories 276
Jan 15, 2008LonelinessMiscellaneous Stories 850
Jan 9, 2008Never AgainMiscellaneous Stories 612

Comments

Title article: Redemption
Date: 2008-04-14 11:28:23

This was an awesome story. Well told, held my interest. There's something about pirates that makes a girls' insides turn to mush....hahaha. Seriously, this was a great story

Title article: Virtually Finished
Date: 2008-04-14 11:16:12

Tarhead..you're silly. 
 
perception is in the eye of the beholder. I could be Miss America in the right light

Title article: A Horse is a Horse, Of Course...
Date: 2008-04-14 11:11:10

Trying to picture the whole scene. Some of it is a little confusing...did he get off the horse before hitting it? Otherwise, it was a well-told story...

Title article: I give up
Date: 2008-04-14 11:07:26

how sad....

Title article: 3-way
Date: 2008-04-14 10:19:26

Crazy...

Title article: Read The Book! - A.D.H.D Uncovered
Date: 2008-04-11 11:21:05

When I used to teach..I would have kids come tell me they were ADHD as if it were an excuse. I told them, then I guess you'll have to work harder at paying attention. I also noticed that if I gave them any sort of teaching responsibility..they would do better. I know that if my youngest child is considered ADHD...we are NOT going to go the medication route 
 
Great story and look at the mind waves of someone with this disorder

Title article: Addict
Date: 2008-04-11 11:17:31

How horrible for the child. Very well written poem. I hope that it isn't autobiographical...

Title article: As If You Would Understand
Date: 2008-04-11 11:15:32

How sad....

Title article: YASAC
Date: 2008-04-11 11:13:35

What?

Title article: caged animal
Date: 2008-04-11 11:09:59

It's sad that people treat each other like this....teenagers are the cruelest

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06/24/2008 07:51:59Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/23/2008 14:55:37Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/17/2008 08:47:15Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/17/2008 08:22:52Re:What Happened to Storiesville?Off-Topic7204
06/02/2008 08:27:17Re:Comments: Tragedy and Good IntentionsOff-Topic1521
05/27/2008 09:02:48Re:whoa!!!Off-Topic1582
05/23/2008 08:30:09Re:SaddenedOff-Topic2715

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Name Entry
Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/20/2008 13:02:15
Naughty me................never signed in.


Here it is!

Phil
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 05/03/2008 18:11:11
Tag! Now you're it!

R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
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crownville		 Created On: 05/01/2008 03:56:45
Something is missing from that pic of yours...oh I know what it is.......the crown...

Christian Wright (The 13th)

Hotville
 Created On: 04/23/2008 13:29:40
How you doin.
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Just fine and yourself?
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

 Created On: 04/23/2008 11:46:59
Edited By Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^) On: 09/09/2008 08:38:26

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Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Thanks...
Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 04/17/2008 03:12:32
Hello!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Hello to you too!!!
Christian Wright (The 13th)

Moodyville
 Created On: 04/06/2008 03:40:02
Edited By Christian wright (thirteen) On: 04/06/2008 05:07:06
Me... moody... only when I have'nt got that damned crown.Great stories you have and thanks for your help to mine.thanks
David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump)

right next door
 Created On: 04/03/2008 01:16:53
what do you mean, i never signed your guest book!

see!

just occurred to me that i've been reading your work for some time now and never stopped in to tell you what a great writer you are...

write on!
Feedback from Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret): Thank you David....I mean Tarhead!
R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it 		Created On: 02/04/2008 07:00:20
Edited By R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter) On: 02/12/2008 14:07:30


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