A Healing

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Patrick O. (Roadkill315)
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Member Since 01/07/2008
Last Online 07/04/2008
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About Myself: My interests are my marriage, our 4 kids, writing, fishing, golf, nascar, fantasy sports, chess, travel, my hot sauce collection now at 255 bottles and growing, and food that is very hot and spicy enjoyed with cold Labatts.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 10, 2008Alternative Gaye CallingMiscellaneous Stories 201
Apr 3, 2008Rouge's Realm Revealed (Chapter One)Science Fiction 185
Apr 2, 2008Manifest ThirstAdventure 439

Comments

Title article: The Birth and Death of a Gang(ster)(s)
Date: 2008-04-10 14:51:30

Well, I read the whole thing, as I always do. But at the end I found your comment to some who might skim to the end. Not sure why you felt the need to write that bit and cap it off with see if I care. So, I'll end my comment here, since you dont care.

Title article: The Witch Hunters: Life of the Half-Witch Eliza Saunders
Date: 2008-04-10 14:48:04

Write more if the story line and characters inspire you. I think your storyline is one that could certainly be turned into a fine story. The question can only be answered by you.

Title article: I'm sorry
Date: 2008-04-10 14:24:32

Simple, easy to follow top to bottom, thanks

Title article: Far Out ((Part 1))
Date: 2008-04-10 09:45:28

Indiana Rivers - what a character name. What is next for Indiana Rivers?

Title article: The death of a spy
Date: 2008-04-10 09:39:11

Nice start, got the questions churning in my mind fast... reading on so many sentences starting with the word, "I"... great story line, interesting idea for the kid character. His motivation for killing his dad in the end didnt seem to fit well, needs more to justify the act he is coimmitting in my simple mind.

Title article: For the cause
Date: 2008-04-10 09:31:33

First short paragraph; not too engaing. Some good action in the rest. I take it this is more a draft of a story line you'd want to turn into a story.

Title article: Inside
Date: 2008-04-10 09:14:23

Fantastic comes to mind... I don't have a headache, or do I? Thanks for the work!

Title article: Alternative Gaye Calling
Date: 2008-04-10 09:12:15
From the "New Writing Prompt" thread...
For those of you not following that thread in the forum, I place this story here as well and invite all to go to that thread and join in the challenge there.

Title article: Let Me Go!
Date: 2008-04-09 10:56:18

Can't begin to count the number of times I wish I had a parachute myself. Getting fired sucks too. Captured those realities well here. Thanks

Title article: The Abyss Above
Date: 2008-04-09 07:32:49

I hate make shift door knobs... But I really liked your story!

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R.E.Potter (R.E.Potter)
This e-mail address is being protected from spam bots, you need JavaScript enabled to view it 		Created On: 04/14/2008 19:44:54
enjoy reading your work.

Christian Wright (The 13th)

Dublin Land
 Created On: 04/14/2008 09:41:52
Like the new profile pic.
Keep writing and goodluck.
Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)

The Garden State
 Created On: 04/04/2008 12:48:35
Hi, Thanks for commenting on both of my stories, I really do appreciate the feed back! Just hopping around to introduce myself. There is a ton of stuff on this site.
Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

New Braunfels, TX
 Created On: 04/04/2008 08:15:03
Just stopping by to say I am glad that you are joining in a lot more lately...
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 03/13/2008 18:40:25
Don't know if you write any, but I catch your comments around on other people stories and they're usually pretty good.
I'd like to see a story or something of yours.
Feedback from Patrick O. (Roadkill315): HI, thanks for the note in my guestbook, I have recently posted a couple of stories, would love your review. Thanks

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