Under Pressure

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Elijah

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bill neilson (billyboy)
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Member Since 01/04/2008
Last Online 11/19/2008
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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 29, 2008SOMETIMES IT PAYS TO BE FIRSTMiscellaneous Stories 86
Sep 30, 2008A WALK IN THE PARKMiscellaneous Stories 158
Mar 26, 2008CYCLONE CHARLIEMiscellaneous Stories 265
Feb 3, 2008"HAPPY ANNIVERSARY LOVE"Miscellaneous Stories 323
Jan 11, 2008THE BIGGER THE BETTERMiscellaneous Stories 307

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Title article: Satine's Musings On Her Love
Date: 2008-01-04 23:31:23

I like it. thought the metaphores were slightly overdone but worked well anyway. really captured your character.

Title article: In the End
Date: 2008-01-04 02:21:37

this left me a bit confused. was fred a girl friend or counselor?was chris hurting himself just to be noticed or was he really suicidal? 
Don't wish to be too pedantic, but he called "threw" an open window. "sitting on the floor where he stood." good storyline, perhaps a little more editing. well done,.i haven't got that far yet.

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