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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 30, 2008	A WALK IN THE PARK	Miscellaneous Stories	76
Mar 26, 2008	CYCLONE CHARLIE	Miscellaneous Stories	212
Feb 3, 2008	"HAPPY ANNIVERSARY LOVE"	Miscellaneous Stories	282
Jan 18, 2008	Hammer and Nail	Mystery	396
Jan 11, 2008	THE BIGGER THE BETTER	Miscellaneous Stories	271

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Total number of comments: 46

Title article: The Devil you Know
Date: 2008-10-07 05:12:03

This is a clever story. The plot was original and well thought out. However I agree with Hodder, it seemed to me that you rushed to the ending, which was a shame, because the whole thing was very well written otherwise.
I still enjoyed it. Keep writing, you have a nice style.

Title article: Wish ( Her lullyaby)
Date: 2008-10-04 05:18:12

It just goes to show. A poem (or story) doesn't have to be written in anything but plain, simple language to be enjoyable and inspirational. This is a delightful child's prayer. I loved it.

Title article: Photograph
Date: 2008-10-03 23:30:27

Beautifully told story, made even more poignant and real by your use of plain, simple language. I was there with the old man, feeling his pain and anguish. Congratulations and well done.

Title article: WORDS AFTER SEX.
Date: 2008-10-03 23:17:21

Use your imagination. What he said was hurtful. That's enough.
"words like insects, biting at her flesh and mind" My God! what more do you need. A lovely, sad, poem.Well done Terry.

Title article: the marble
Date: 2008-10-03 05:03:50

Couldn't agree more. Wonderful, evocative descriptions that make the story come to life. "A smile that carved it's way into her dough skin........." Wow. Great writing. Well done.

Title article: Why, Daddy?
Date: 2008-09-30 03:13:22

Wonderful. One of the best pieces of writing I have read on this site. You have a talent for getting the atmosphere just right. Not too poignant or sentimental. Like I said, just right. Well done. Give us more.

Title article: Light Bringer
Date: 2008-09-24 05:18:33

very evocative writing.Did the lightbringer epitomise all mankind or am I putting my own construction on your story? Whatever, it was a thought provoking piece of work.
Hate to nit pick but I hope you meant disdain, not distain. Well done.

Title article: You Can't Get There From Here
Date: 2008-09-24 02:44:35

well written story.If this is an actual happening, then I sympathise with the despatchers.
Made me smile and entertained me at the same time.You have a good style and good use of words.
Good job.

Title article: She Said
Date: 2008-09-22 05:00:14

Liked the format and the rhyme.
Good story too. I guess a lot of us could relate to this situation. And yeah, would be good set to a tune.

Title article: Acorns Don't Fall Far
Date: 2008-09-22 04:53:00

This is good.Well written and constructed. Love the way he was pulled back into shape and the wink was beautiful. What chance have those boys got?

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