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bill neilson (billyboy)
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Member Since 01/04/2008
Last Online 08/28/2008
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DateTitleCategoryHits
Mar 26, 2008CYCLONE CHARLIEMiscellaneous Stories 177
Feb 3, 2008"HAPPY ANNIVERSARY LOVE"Miscellaneous Stories 258
Jan 18, 2008Hammer and NailMystery 364
Jan 11, 2008THE BIGGER THE BETTERMiscellaneous Stories 255
Jan 7, 2008A boot, a pen and a five dollar noteMiscellaneous Stories 542

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Title article: Picture-Perfect
Date: 2008-01-17 23:49:54

Wellwritten, interesting. I liked it.

Title article: Bourbon Legends
Date: 2008-01-13 23:20:49

Great writing Andrew. Wonderful stoyline, got me from start to finish. Loved it!

Title article: Regret
Date: 2008-01-13 16:02:59

Liked the style, but the connection between the start and finish is rather tenuous. Good storyline.

Title article: In the shadows
Date: 2008-01-12 02:32:31

Captured the scariness really well, however I too would like to know what happens next. 
A sequel maybe? please.

Title article: A boot, a pen and a five dollar note
Date: 2008-01-09 22:18:37

Thanks mate, I wondered if there any more of us on board.

Title article: A boot, a pen and a five dollar note
Date: 2008-01-09 22:16:52

Thanks mate, I wondered if there were any more of us on board.

Title article: Teeming
Date: 2008-01-08 02:39:12

WOW!!!!

Title article: Satine's Musings On Her Love
Date: 2008-01-04 23:31:23

I like it. thought the metaphores were slightly overdone but worked well anyway. really captured your character.

Title article: In the End
Date: 2008-01-04 02:21:37

this left me a bit confused. was fred a girl friend or counselor?was chris hurting himself just to be noticed or was he really suicidal? 
Don't wish to be too pedantic, but he called "threw" an open window. "sitting on the floor where he stood." good storyline, perhaps a little more editing. well done,.i haven't got that far yet.

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