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“What do you see when you look out at the...

When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...

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Member Since	01/04/2008
Last Online	09/01/2008
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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Feb 3, 2008	"HAPPY ANNIVERSARY LOVE"	Miscellaneous Stories	262
Jan 7, 2008	A boot, a pen and a five dollar note	Miscellaneous Stories	557
Mar 26, 2008	CYCLONE CHARLIE	Miscellaneous Stories	181
Jan 18, 2008	Hammer and Nail	Mystery	369
Jan 11, 2008	THE BIGGER THE BETTER	Miscellaneous Stories	259

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Total number of comments: 36

Title article: shyness and love
Date: 2008-04-02 03:53:18

If that really is a true story, then I say remember you're still only 18. Heaps of time.
Think positive, think beautiful and that's how you will be perceived. Good luck.
Looking back, I see this was published on April Ist.
Have you sucked us all in??

Title article: my baby
Date: 2008-03-31 01:32:54

A lovely vignette. To condense a mother's feelings for her child, from birth to adulthood in so few words is very clever.
Well done Kasey.

Title article: Broken and bleeding re edited
Date: 2008-03-29 05:27:05

I agree with Dirk, except I would say forget the last TWO sentences. Good yarn otherwise. Simple spelling mistakes and missing words are distracting.
Keep writing Billy.

Title article: Speed Bump
Date: 2008-03-28 00:32:46

Well written, thoughtful, entertaining.
You have a real talent man. More please!

Title article: Chapter 5 Rocks
Date: 2008-03-24 00:23:07

o.k. That's it. I'm outa here!!

Title article: Streetlamp Romance
Date: 2008-03-23 05:46:59

Sounds like one confused guy. Had me confused too.
Does he love her not? Does he want or not?
Maybe I just don't dig romance stories.

Title article: Street Value
Date: 2008-03-22 05:26:40

Jesus!! guess what I'm going to be thinking about when I lay there trying to get to sleep.

Good writing Carey. I liked it.

Title article: witchiness?
Date: 2008-03-22 01:33:54

I agree, needs a lot more care with spelling and grammar. Could have been an interesting little story. Keep at it. Had what I call a "Saturday, Sunday." finish. Weak end.

Title article: Day of Terror
Date: 2008-03-19 23:07:18

I too have been to Adelaide on holiday from the West, so I can relate. Good writing and well described. I agree that the ending was a little anti climatic, but i enjoyed it.
More please.

Title article: Hastings Hospital
Date: 2008-03-19 03:40:36

Enjoyed your story, but I agree, nurse Seally can stay in Hastings

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