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Hits	2005
Online Status	OFFLINE
Member Since	12/30/2007
Last Online	10/07/2008
Connections	8
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Website/Blog:	petrolmachine.livejournal.com
About Myself:	chances are, if you're wondering about the profound meaning of one of my poems, you've been tossed a red herring. but feel free to question me any how.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 4, 2008	ever hear that good things come in threes?	Poetry	121
Aug 7, 2008	pow wow grounds	Poetry	128
May 23, 2008	untitled assignment	Miscellaneous Stories	168
May 23, 2008	so hot so cold	Poetry	162
Apr 9, 2008	the zen days: a mini-collective	Poetry	184
Apr 9, 2008	where kaija krakken creeps	Poetry	163
Apr 9, 2008	winnipeg	Poetry	149
Mar 31, 2008	dockyard pin-up	Poetry	170
Mar 31, 2008	she's saffron	Poetry	143
Mar 31, 2008	i'm of a dizzy heart	Poetry	182
Mar 31, 2008	i am the city	Poetry	136
Mar 31, 2008	bridge monster	Non-Fiction	199
Jan 6, 2008	ghazal for kate	Poetry	288
Jan 3, 2008	axis of a queen	Poetry	304
Jan 3, 2008	heart on the dashboard	Poetry	306
Jan 2, 2008	goodnight, america	Poetry	302
Jan 2, 2008	agricultural bible	Poetry	265
Jan 2, 2008	bullet	Poetry	315
Dec 30, 2007	organic break beats in nature	Science Fiction	646

Comments

Title article: Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotion
Date: 2008-07-24 09:14:15

"there would proof"

i think you're looking for 'there would be proof' or 'there would prove'. besides that though, a very interesting poem. frank like you. =) no funny business

Title article: Ashes
Date: 2008-06-14 14:19:39

all i can stress is DESCRIPTIVE WORDS

they are like the glitter that keeps my poetry looking radtastic. though message is certainly important, the words and metaphors you choose will be what set your poem a part from the rest. right now your language is feeling a little cliche

Title article: Coffee Stains, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-14 14:08:41

semike;
i nearly clicked "report this comment"

Title article: Coffee Stains, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-13 10:51:55

if i had a nickel for every time you typed the name "dylan"..

Title article: Hitchhiking
Date: 2008-05-28 12:55:51

cockroach reigns supreme!

yuussss

Title article: untitled assignment
Date: 2008-05-28 12:54:18

the reason she found money trivial didn't have anything to do with her nationality. just a personal opinion i always thought she would hold. in cassie's younger days she was quite the vagabond. where ever the wind carried her was where she'd end up. it seems natural that she wouldn't give two shits about cash.

Title article: i'm of a dizzy heart
Date: 2008-05-08 11:06:21

i was going to reply to that with a woot, but realised i had all ready said that... i need some new material

=)

Title article: where kaija krakken creeps
Date: 2008-04-15 05:58:30

=D

thanks, miss

Title article: i'm of a dizzy heart
Date: 2008-03-31 14:08:16

woot

Title article: bridge monster
Date: 2008-03-31 14:06:28

Not much to understand. This used to be a poem, but I could never figure out where to put line breaks. So I just gave in, punctuated it, and decided to come back on a later date.

There's a story behind it, and I'm thinking maybe I'll elaborate on it.

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country, texas	Created On: 01/11/2008 01:24:30 just hopping profiles... wanted to make sure i didn't miss something! *waves hi!