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Meh. I really wasn't crazy about the subject matter. The writing was mediocre. Just didn't really grasp my interest, you know? Yeah, quite a long piece. My cup of tea. I love science fiction or any sort of new world new galaxy bullshit. Great gems of imagery strewn in. A little cliche. But painted a few interesting images. I like the painted silver bit. This was a really different story. "the city clawed at the sky, columns of majestic silver needles poking through the thin, fair-weather clouds." And that line made me stop in my tracks. I love your descriptions. Karma, okay. I can dig it. I like the woman's final words haha. Very savvy. lol the expression on my face must've been priceless. you could say i was a little slow to figure out how to read "I AM THE LIGHT OF THE WORLD". love the visual format. looks great, reads okay. for a poet i'm not a big fan of poetry. =) LOL a moon dog is a natural phenomena that occurs when its wicked hot outside. it looks like a silver ring around the moon.Title article: bullet Date: 2008-09-07 15:36:59
a duvet is a feather quilt of sorts. doo- vay i can see the sky through my window. cause for some reason my blinds are always open. love the crits, love the compliments keep 'em coming hahah, maybe that's because i had my own acid "days"... or year, you could say.
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