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Member Since	12/30/2007
Last Online	09/04/2008
Connections	8
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Website/Blog:	petrolmachine.livejournal.com
About Myself:	chances are, if you're wondering about the profound meaning of one of my poems, you've been tossed a red herring. but feel free to question me any how.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 4, 2008	ever hear that good things come in threes?	Poetry	50
Aug 7, 2008	pow wow grounds	Poetry	93
May 23, 2008	untitled assignment	Miscellaneous Stories	154
May 23, 2008	so hot so cold	Poetry	141
Apr 9, 2008	the zen days: a mini-collective	Poetry	167
Apr 9, 2008	where kaija krakken creeps	Poetry	146
Apr 9, 2008	winnipeg	Poetry	125
Mar 31, 2008	dockyard pin-up	Poetry	149
Mar 31, 2008	she's saffron	Poetry	119
Mar 31, 2008	i'm of a dizzy heart	Poetry	158
Mar 31, 2008	i am the city	Poetry	119
Mar 31, 2008	bridge monster	Non-Fiction	180
Jan 6, 2008	ghazal for kate	Poetry	270
Jan 3, 2008	axis of a queen	Poetry	287
Jan 3, 2008	heart on the dashboard	Poetry	282
Jan 2, 2008	goodnight, america	Poetry	282
Jan 2, 2008	agricultural bible	Poetry	241
Jan 2, 2008	bullet	Poetry	290
Dec 30, 2007	organic break beats in nature	Science Fiction	623

Comments

Title article: goodnight, america
Date: 2008-08-07 16:18:58

yes, the lack of punctuation is confusing for most people. but its supposed to all be one thought, and i feel like when i use periods it disrupts that. in this poem i rely heavily on linebreaks for pauses as opposed to the more conventional comma

Title article: Logical thinking and the stupidity of emotion
Date: 2008-07-24 09:14:15

"there would proof"

i think you're looking for 'there would be proof' or 'there would prove'. besides that though, a very interesting poem. frank like you. =) no funny business

Title article: Ashes
Date: 2008-06-14 14:19:39

all i can stress is DESCRIPTIVE WORDS

they are like the glitter that keeps my poetry looking radtastic. though message is certainly important, the words and metaphors you choose will be what set your poem a part from the rest. right now your language is feeling a little cliche

Title article: Coffee Stains, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-14 14:08:41

semike;
i nearly clicked "report this comment"

Title article: Coffee Stains, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-13 10:51:55

if i had a nickel for every time you typed the name "dylan"..

Title article: Hitchhiking
Date: 2008-05-28 12:55:51

cockroach reigns supreme!

yuussss

Title article: untitled assignment
Date: 2008-05-28 12:54:18

the reason she found money trivial didn't have anything to do with her nationality. just a personal opinion i always thought she would hold. in cassie's younger days she was quite the vagabond. where ever the wind carried her was where she'd end up. it seems natural that she wouldn't give two shits about cash.

Title article: i'm of a dizzy heart
Date: 2008-05-08 11:06:21

i was going to reply to that with a woot, but realised i had all ready said that... i need some new material

=)

Title article: where kaija krakken creeps
Date: 2008-04-15 05:58:30

=D

thanks, miss

Title article: i'm of a dizzy heart
Date: 2008-03-31 14:08:16

woot

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David Neve (Tarhead Mugwump) hill country, texas	Created On: 01/11/2008 01:24:30 just hopping profiles... wanted to make sure i didn't miss something! *waves hi!