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acckk i know i need to figure it out. i think writing this helped me just collect things together a little better.Title article: Ashes Date: 2008-06-14 14:19:39
all i can stress is DESCRIPTIVE WORDS they are like the glitter that keeps my poetry looking radtastic. though message is certainly important, the words and metaphors you choose will be what set your poem a part from the rest. right now your language is feeling a little clichesemike; i nearly clicked "report this comment" if i had a nickel for every time you typed the name "dylan".. cockroach reigns supreme! yuussss the reason she found money trivial didn't have anything to do with her nationality. just a personal opinion i always thought she would hold. in cassie's younger days she was quite the vagabond. where ever the wind carried her was where she'd end up. it seems natural that she wouldn't give two shits about cash. i was going to reply to that with a woot, but realised i had all ready said that... i need some new material =) =D thanks, miss woot Not much to understand. This used to be a poem, but I could never figure out where to put line breaks. So I just gave in, punctuated it, and decided to come back on a later date. There's a story behind it, and I'm thinking maybe I'll elaborate on it.
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