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lol the expression on my face must've been priceless. you could say i was a little slow to figure out how to read "I AM THE LIGHT OF THE WORLD". love the visual format. looks great, reads okay. for a poet i'm not a big fan of poetry. =) LOL a moon dog is a natural phenomena that occurs when its wicked hot outside. it looks like a silver ring around the moon.Title article: bullet Date: 2008-09-07 15:36:59
a duvet is a feather quilt of sorts. doo- vay i can see the sky through my window. cause for some reason my blinds are always open. love the crits, love the compliments keep 'em coming hahah, maybe that's because i had my own acid "days"... or year, you could say. Absolutely loved it. I felt like I could get lost in the descriptions-- and I did a few times, so be careful of that. The only technical difficulties I noticed was that when you're writing about him looking at his watch it gets a little awkward. Maybe just look it over and see if anything can be done. Thanks for the good read, they're hard to come by on here. =) I'm usually the person dancing. :P But I never really thought about the other side of the story -- the people that may be judging me haha. Morgen rocks and stuff. well, i don't know about you ladies. but i'd fuck that guy "wearing my flip flops walking to the chip shop" that was a time in my life when i was a collection of drug poems. and he was a heroin addict, yes. but i was just a coke head
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