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About Myself: never special.
i care for music lyrics and stucture
but am ignorant to it's standards.
i prefer to love then be loved.
//i am against before,present and after.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
May 24, 2008{The Trees Survived}Romance 378
Feb 2, 2008When An Owl scribbles his Love for the planet, he Will Receive nothing.Miscellaneous Stories 163
Dec 28, 2007MIND ALTERING AILMENTSMiscellaneous Stories 253
Dec 28, 2007lifting from a brown boxMiscellaneous Stories 220
Mar 17, 2008Rainbows under The SeaNon-Fiction 226
Mar 1, 2008zoom In on a turnback worldNon-Fiction 179

Comments

Total number of comments: 8

Title article: Rainbows under The Sea
Date: 2008-03-19 01:28:42

it is confusing and hard to read. i didn't feel too comfortable with this being read so I got a bit evil and if you bothered to make an effort, then thanks. 
 
oh and its about a waffle eating a whale's tree limb if you were not too clear on the story. the people are all allusions to underwater gun turrets blasting at the sun's worst enemy, the number 23.:)

Title article: VIC SLADE, PRIVATE EYE: The Slade Genesis - Chapter 2
Date: 2008-03-19 01:02:30

lovely writing! fluent and lively. 
 
well put!

Title article: MIND ALTERING AILMENTS
Date: 2008-03-17 18:26:17

yes I have but I was really drawing inspiration while listening to Radiohead. And I was typing fast so this thing went by in a blur. Hence the bad spelling and grammar.

Title article: Damn Government Fools
Date: 2008-03-01 22:07:58
well done
Funny good rhyming. You could probably film a good satirical rap video with this.

Title article: Dial 000
Date: 2008-03-01 16:57:40
funny
great dialogue! toatally amusing. though i do wish Doug had gotten some karma sent on him.

Title article: zoom In on a turnback world
Date: 2008-03-01 16:28:08

oh and there's more to this. So the ending is maybe just sorta misleading.  
Unless anyone likes how it end. Im sorta undecided.

Title article: MIND ALTERING AILMENTS
Date: 2008-02-03 00:48:39

i love how they spit ad-space into it.

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Last 10 Forum Posts
DateSubjectCategoryHits
03/16/2008 23:18:23Re:OnomatopoeiaOff-Topic353
03/15/2008 22:32:43OnomatopoeiaOff-Topic353
03/15/2008 22:28:48Re:Favorite AuthorOff-Topic4418
03/02/2008 23:35:57Lyrics! Lyrics! Lyrics!Off-Topic90
03/02/2008 23:35:11Lyrics! Lyrics! Lyrics!Off-Topic78
03/02/2008 23:34:27Lyrics! Lyrics! Lyrics!Off-Topic85

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