Apparition of Justice

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About Myself: I'm thirteen, to be fourteen in November. I read, write, sing and play violin. I love all the Sherlock Holmes cases, Jane Eyre, Little Women, The Count of Monte Cristo,all horror stories, books by Christopher Pike and mysteries. I listen to The Beatles mostly, but some Panic at the Disco and Billy Talent. That's about it! Bye!

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Aug 1, 2008An Emily Heckott Mystery: The Sticky-Note Murder, Chapter 1Mystery 86
Aug 27, 2008Questions and AnswersPoetry 14
Jan 14, 2008The SearchAdventure 292

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Total number of comments: 29

Title article: Vanity(from the minds of Zombie Punk & Tarhead Mugwump)
Date: 2008-08-28 00:42:36
Creepy!
Now I have that scary sensation that I'm being watched. Eek! I don't think I'll sleep well tonight. Really well written, though! Good job!

Title article: 2 Poems of Her
Date: 2008-08-27 23:14:58
Good Job!
Both were really good, but the first was my favourite, too. I don't really know how to describe how I took them, but I thought both were excellent. Keep up the good work!

Title article: Sahara We See
Date: 2008-08-27 23:00:27
Neat.
Really different from most stuff I've read, but I liked it. Good job!

Title article: Punishment
Date: 2008-08-27 22:55:49
Amazing.
Though he was a serial killer,I still found myself sympathizing with him. It was very sad, poor guy. Oh well, happens to the best of us. Well, most people aren't executed or murderers, but you know what I mean.

Title article: A Second Chance
Date: 2008-08-27 22:33:45

Such a sweet story. I wasn't expecting it to end like that. Which is good. I like being surprised. Well done!

Title article: Hitchhiking
Date: 2008-08-21 18:24:02
Holy crow-bird
Know when you're reading a really good story or watching a movie and realize you've been holding your breath? Starting with '"Oh shit"' and ending with 'And then the lizard/criminal devoured the troublemaker whole.' I'm pretty sure I wasn't breathing. I'm also sure that that means even in writers block you can write extremely well!

Title article: An Emily Heckott Mystery: The Sticky-Note Murder, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-10 19:20:17

Thanks for your comments, chaabuk and lemon. Hopefully I'll get around to writing more, but I still don't know what's gonna happen next. Lemon, sorry you couldn't make it all the way through. It's not surprising I sound childish, I still am one. Maybe as I get older my writing will mature. Thanks for trying!

Title article: 1961
Date: 2008-08-01 01:37:17

Holy cow! That was really shocking and really sad at the same time. It kept me totally interested in the story the whole time. The ending was really unexpected. The whole thing was really well written. Good Job!

Title article: The Last Words
Date: 2008-07-09 17:44:54

Good story. It made me think. I once read that the whole Judas' betrayal to Jesus was all pre-planned. Like Jesus knew one had to betray him so to fulfill the prophecy. Judas was really the beloved desciple and Jesus entrusted him with the most important and difficult job. Kind of like how Snape ended up being good all along and Dumbledore knew he had to die and trusted Snape to kill him.  
Yeah, I know, the whole things pretty blasphemous, especially coming from a Roman Catholic like myself. Oh well, I'd rather think of it in this way instead of Judas cold-heartedly betraying the saviour. Wouldn't you?

Title article: The Search
Date: 2008-07-09 16:49:03
To Loris
I edited it a bit, hopefully the paragraphing will be better. I never was very good at it. Thanks for posting!

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